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Thanks for the review, Dono ^^ I shall edit my story. And... I like the guy-ish names! *sheepish smile* Ahum. Anyway =] I'll look into my story and make some ...

Thanks for the reviews, guys! ^^ 2424: I called it Halloween because of the Halloween-themed decoration of the room they're in, and because it's close to being the actual day ...

Thanks for the reviews ^^ Tin Fish: I'll get editing asap. Thanks for all the nitpicks, they're very helpful! I appreciate it. =] Vyper: You know what, dear? I like ...

Thanks for the comment ^^ I've edited the story, now. *hug* XxxDo

Thanks for the reviews, guys !! ^^ Stella: The room is HUGE, lol. It's meant to be an empty storage room of some sort; one of them big baracks with ...

Thanks for the review ^^ I'm glad you enjoyed the story! Xxx

Hey Teddy, Thanks a lot for the review !! ^^ XxxDo

Thanks for the comments :) XxxDo

Thanks for the comments :) I'm editing right now. XxxDo

Hey, thanks for the comment :) XxxDo

Thanks for the review, Sapphire :D XxxDo

Thanks for the review !! :) XxxDo

Thanks for the comments! And Fellow; don't worry, I'm not a zombie :wink: XxxDo

Hey there, First off: Your story gets a bit confusing at moments. Does Carly choose to stay with the guy even though he threatens to hurt her, or does she ...

Thanks for the review, Sam!! I'm currently writing the second half of this short story, but seeing as whenever I post things longer than this one there are few people ...