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^ There's the contest, in case you're interested. It's a fun one. Hope you enjoy the story. Feel free to be harsh in your review :wink: XxxDo ---------------------------------- My stress ...

Thanks for the reviews, guys. I'll get editing soon =] Tin fish: I always make that mistake =P it's just one of those things I can't seem to get right. ...

Allright, here's the deal; I have to do an essay on Gabriel Garcia Marquez's novel Love in the time of Cholera. This is the essay title: The passing of time ...

I only get this 'cause I've seen the Charlies Angels movies - which includes a part where they dance to this song. *watches video* His pants are funny =P XxxDo

Hey Tiff, First of all; I love the way that is written. Only one thing didn't read so nicely, and that was "Chubby child legs". The rest was very good, ...

Hey, you ^^ Interesting writing style. I like it. Here's the review: Repetition :In the first four sentences you use the word “school” five times, and the word “bathroom” four ...

You guys have nice video ideas ^^ And you inspired me to start making a movie trailer! *gives cookies* XxxDo

Thanks for the review, Dono ^^ I shall edit my story. And... I like the guy-ish names! *sheepish smile* Ahum. Anyway =] I'll look into my story and make some ...

Hey there, I've got a story that qualifies as scary (or so the readers said) so I hope you'll like it ^^ Halloween: Halloween II: Thanksies ^^ XxxDo

*shakes head in disbelief* Children these days... ^^ XxxDo

xD the password I use for a bunch of things (YWS, facebook, blogs, etc o.O methinks I'll be changing it asap) had a total of 666 hits on google *win* ...

Count to Ten (By Karen Rose); boy is traumatized - grows up to traumatize and kill others as he seeks to punish those who mistreated him in the past. XxxDo

Hey there, The review is in the attachment. PM me if there are any issues opening it, okay? It's probably fine, but some others have, in the past, had trouble ...

Maybe I'll adapt this to become the prologue of a longer story (if I find the time/energy to start yet another long story :roll: ) but for now it's just ...

Hey, you. Welcome to the YWS ^^ About your work: It's short, as the other reviewers have mentioned *nods* and I'd advice you to post more than one paragraph at ...