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Welcome to YWS ! First of all; PM me about the things you don't understand. I'll do what I can to make things easier for you. Secondly; the YWS enforces ...

Ah ^_^ I like this piece a lot! I thought it was one of them complainy pieces of writing, but then it turned out to be quite different - which ...

Whoa. This is a lot to review at once. I've started reading, though - and I'm curious to see where it leads - so I'll review the first half now ...

Hey there, first of all: This is very short. Do you plan on making this longer or is it a stand-alone writing exercise of sorts? ^_^ I must say though, ...

Hey there, Let's get on with the review, shall we? I'd pointed this out and he told me he’d cut it chopping vegetables for dinner, but when did he ever ...

Hey there, Thanks so much for the reviews! I'll make the adjustments ^_^ Asxz: Thanks for the article link; I definitely need it. I'm a disaster with apostrophes. LaReina: It's ...

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Hey there, here's your review: I leapt out of bed, and opened my door silently. Not to fond of the word "silently" in this sentence. Especially since you use the ...

Noughts and Crosses, Knife Edge, and Checkmate - series by Malorie Blackman Check out the link ^ Shantaram by Gregory David Roberts My Sisters Keeper by Jodi Picoult Nineteen Minutes ...

Name: Cashmoney Genre: Adventure/Action Summary: An alcoholic father, a kindapping attempt, a load of cash on a doostep, and a pre-school. Sounds interesting, no? ^^ Word Count: 4,706 words Link: ...

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Thank you, dear ^^ XxxDo

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Please? *pouty face* ^^ Thank you, dear. XxxDo

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