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Hey there, I've noticed that this is the last of the parts that is on YWS, so I'm hoping you'll be posting more sometime. When you do, try to remember ...

I'm sure you had no idea that I was going to be reviewing this ;) I'm quite fascinated by this story, which is why I'm reviewing all of the parts. ...

It’s me. Again. ^_^ I find it interesting how your character interacts with "herself". It’s complicated to give a voice (or thoughts) attitude, without being able to describe the person ...

Guess who’s back? Yup. Me. Wooo ^^ Here it goes: Again! Why italics? I fought the war to bottle the screams and take a look at the damage. Bottle? Do ...

Hey again, Here’s the review: Ouch! That hurt! Not too fond of this beginning. It doesn’t work so well as an opening sentence for a chapter. You’ll need something stronger. ...

Hey there. I’m on a reviewing spree, and will be reviewing all parts of this story that are up right now. Hope that makes you a happy panda - so ...

Haha !! I love this ! It's so absolutely random ^^ (Hermione appears, barely dressed) *grins* You're epic. Harry: Oh, shucks. I love the comments Harry makes. And Hermione's whole ...

Hey there, First off, I'm going to second (third?) what the previous reviewers said; ^_^ it's romantic, and adorable! Yeah, wish I was feeling like that. I love this! With ...

Hey there, ^_^ Before I start being nitpicky, I'd like to mention that I thought this was a good piece of work. It caught my attention, and held it all ...

Hey there, I'll be your reviewer today ^_^ First off - I think you should split up your paragraphs. They're huge! Now, let's get on with the nitpicks :wink: Rushing ...

Hey Mars, I'll be nitpicky, if you want ^_^ I meet him on the battle field on a snowy day. My very first thought? Why is this not in the ...

Hey there, This is interesting - you manage to tell quite a story in very few words. Nitpicks have been taken care of by the reviewers that came before me, ...

Thanks, FTH ! (Ha! I'll be the only one on here that knows that nickname! Well... not for long, probably, but hey ^_^ for now.) The reviews is helpful, for ...

*gasp* Google images lied to me ! I searched "Dollar bill" - I've never been to America, how can I know what's on it? - and it came up with ...

Hey there, As the reviewer above me says: everything's been nitpicked through! Just wanted to let you know that it was an interesting read, and that I quite enjoyed it. ...