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I shot upright in my bed, breathing heavily, sensing that something wasn’t right. Landing my feet on the cold wooden floor I dashed to the window, the flickering light of ...

I LOVE SNOW !! Lol :D They're nice pics !! how much snow was there? I love the way the trees look, it looks so amazing when snow covers the ...

This is beautfiful :D That basically says it all, lol XD Keep writing ! Xxx Do

:D I've commented on this before but I simply HAD to come back and read it again !! It's hilarious ! :wink: Xxx Do

:D !! Thanks guys !

I think it gives a sense of industralism to the symbolism of snow. Lol it didn't make that much sense XD the sign is an old roadsign my parents got ...

Hey :D I like your writing, although it was slightly confusing at one point.. Overall it's good and interesting, are you going to develop it more ?? I think this ...

"So, what is it?" asked Jacobe as he looked at the present his father had bestowed upon him."Anything you want it to be, just love yourself, and your famliy."Said his ...

This is pretty good, but you don't have any type of clear ending. It just kind of... stops in the middle of things. I'd advise you to add to it ...

Lol I've been slacking my way through this year but now I'm working like hell!! I have IGCSE exams in a month, so there's no time for slacking now. Still ...

Thanks you guys !!! Your comments made my day !! :D

Thanks WriterAddict :D Those words are always fun to hear !!

Accidental Felony I stared into the deep orange flames of the vast bonfire, my thoughts wandering freely, the heat of the inferno scolding my face. Letting out a sigh I ...

OMG THESE ARE GORGEOUS !! lol I love sunrise/Sunset photos, they're so amazing! :D They're really nice. Some of your photos are slightly slanted though, which isn't that nice to ...

I really like the photos !! They're gorgeous ! Well done, lucky you had a camera on you for this! It's so beautiful :D Xxx Do