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:D thanks guys I'm currently working on the continuation !!

Haha :D to be very honest, I'm deciding whether to make her crazy or not in the continuation of the story, so it's not surprising that it's difficult to tell ...

Heya :D It's always fun to meet people with the same views !! Animal Rights are important, more than most people tend to realize ! Thanks for the comment! XxxDo

I'm glad you guys like it !! Thanks for the comments!! Oh, and Gryphon, I'll PM! you when it continues :D XxxDo

Cameron Timmel heaved a deep breath, calming her nerves as she lifted her nervously clenched fist to knock. Her knuckles contacted the wooden door, and for a second she shut ...

Whoa. Intense ! Well written, just take care that the formatting isn't too cramped up, makes it hard to read. I like it though! I'm sorry your friend went through ...

I love your story, and am looking foreward to the next bit!!! It's really good, well done, and KEEP WRITING! To Quote Cher: "Gay people are gay for a reason. ...

Aw damn it! The QUOTE feature didn't work out and I have no clue how i messed it up ! Sorry XD XxxDo

LOL !! Cool story, you don't see many stories about drugs nd all like this around here! Basically JF has said everything regarding editing! JF's reviews are the best, seriously. ...

[quote="krazykoreandevil"] URN slowly opened his eyes, and groaned as he slowly rose to his feet. He grimaced, and prepared himself for another attack. His tired, weak arms tried to form ...

This was a production of extreme boredeom XD hope you enjoy it! ------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- I stared out the window of the bus, slumping down

Thanks for the comments!! LOL :D there's a major gender confusion in my story. Cal's a girl. Haha! It's meant to be a shortform for Calleigh ! I'm gonna try ...

On nearly all my works I get the comments about apostrophies, but it's simply the way I write XD so I'm not really planning on changing it. I just prefer ...

Thanks for the advice !! I'm going to work on showing instead of telling =D Also I'll work on Eric's reactions, guess I was too preoccupied with how Alecia felt ...

Thank you JF !! I haven't actually had time to edit the stories you've reviewed for me yet, I've been way to busy with exam revision and I'm sick because ...