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Re: Burnt Memories
Hey guys. I've changed my short story, Burned, from first person to third because I felt it gave me more options in this particular piece of writing. I've changed it ...
May 28, 2008 -
Re: Assassin's Rampage
Hey. Welcome again :D It is a good story, interesting concept, some parts are slightly confusing though. Why does he kill them, why take out the warriors and not just ...
May 28, 2008 -
Re: Assassin's Rampage
Hey :D WELCOME TO YWS!! Also, welcome to the wonderful world of writing in general! If you need any help, PM me! Just wanted to let you know that I've ...
May 28, 2008 -
Re: Animal Rights
Great ! Animal rights rule :D the website... I don't understand that it doesn't work! AAAAAAAARGH haha Maybe it only works when the words are not capitalized? My mistake :D ...
May 27, 2008 -
Re: Two for joy
Heeeeeeeeeeey ! I promised I would take a look at it, so here it is! Hope it helps! I really enjoyed the story :D Keep writing! XxxDo
May 21, 2008 -
Re: Tick...Tick...Boom.
I laughed, smiling at Wesley as he continued his imitation of our math teacher, crossing his eyes and yelling commands in a low voice. “You! Be quiet!” Aaron laughed with ...
May 21, 2008 -
Re: Race
Heeey :D I like this story, its good! Just make sure you space it properly, because when writing is this close together a lot of people are demotivated from reading ...
May 7, 2008 -
Re: Fallen
Haha ! Thanks :D That last comment was funy ! Made me crack up :P Thanks for the comments guys! XxxDo
May 3, 2008 -
Re: Guess the name of the user above you!
Uhmm... you name.... *psychic power fails me* Hmm... well... this is difficult! Sarah ? Maybe? I have no clue :wink: Hobbies: Judo, snowboarding Place : mountains ... Switzerland Attitude : ...
May 3, 2008 -
Re: What is your favorite food?
FOOD !! I can talk about that :D I like food :wink: My fav food ? Hmmmmm, pasta :D and basically everything that's vegetarian! XxxDo
May 3, 2008 -
Re: Rate the Signature Above You [2]
8/10 for such deep philosphical talk :wink:
May 3, 2008 -
Re: Rate the Avatar Above You! [2]
6/10 because that is one helluva weird/scary bug-ish thing? :wink: XxxDo
May 3, 2008 -
Re: Boredom game :D
Basically you say something that you like, e.g: I love dogs. Then the next person answers YES if they agree and NO if they dont, then adds something they like. ...
May 3, 2008 -
Re: Ban The User Above You!
Banned for not knowing where she's from :D
May 3, 2008 -
Re: Burned
Thanks for the comments !! I'm glad you guys like it :D I'm going to edit it to add some detail regarding the father's possible death and try to make ...
May 3, 2008