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Because it rained when the universe was created. Why do teachers hate chewing gum?

Hmm. I'd give myself a few minutes to freak out, then try to see if the lid would open, haha. And I'm hoping it would because I have mild claustrophobia! ...

Heya This was really well-written, you've displayed the emotions and feelings perfectly without getting redundant. Great job. I think the other people pointed out the only nit-picks I saw as ...

Heya Here I am again, commenting on your work :D 3rd review in two days haha :wink: Continue this story, its wonderful! You have a really mature writing voice shining ...

Hey :D This was a fun read !! You have a thing for interestings ways of describing situations, people, objects, anything really. It seems really real, like you're making the ...

Hey there :D I enjoyed that ! I'd love to read the next part of this story, its way nice. Hope my comments are useful to you. Oh, and its ...

Oh, and let me know if you edit it, I'd love to critique it again!! Are you serious about the left-handed thing? Whoa the world is more disturbed than I ...

Oh, and let me know if you edit it, I'd love to critique it again!! Are you serious about the left-handed thing? Whoa the world is more disturbed than I ...

Hey there Finally that review I promised !! I hope it helps :D I liked the story, it was interesting, well done ! XxxDo

Hey there :D Hope my critique helps ! I really enjoyed the prologue, so I must say: continue this you've got something good going! Who is the umbrella friend ?? ...

Hey :D Uhm... These are the things I think are neccesary. -A place for yourself where no one interupts your thinking process -Pen, paper, notebooks, etc -Laptop (better than desktop, ...

Thank you for your comment! I'm editing it right now. The new new version should be up soon ! :wink: XxxDo EDIT: Okay.. The new new version is up now ...

Hey ! Thanks for your comment! And thanks a lot for the link! I like it! 8) Haha its cool, I'm watching it right now! XxxDo

Hey !! Thanks for the comments! I'll get editing :D About the spelling... neighbours is the british way, neighbors the American. Seeing as I am neither (I'm Dutch) I've decided ...

Hey Oneeyed, You have a point there, but unfortunately animals that die of natural causes are hard to find in the fur industry. Those who do will probably be discarded ...