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Hello there, Thai ^^ *Refrains from biting you* =] Heh, okay. Review it is. She was my aristocratic, Aristocats watching princess with brown curly hair. To me, it looked as ...

Hey there, my Adna dearest ^_^ So, here's your general opinion review of the poem, seeing as I am rather failacular at it myself and am therefor incapable of giving ...

Thanks for the review guys! Kalli: *sends PM* ^_^ Lizzie: *snugglehug* =] XxxDo

Hey there ^^ I'm going to review part three of your story, soon, just so you know. Thanks for the review, m'dear. The MC is a she, indeed. In fact, ...

Thanks for the review, dear ^^ I'll take care of the mistakes. This piece is the way I feel about my grandfather. It's completely real, I actually have that photograph ...

Thank you for the review, dear ^^ it's very helpful! I'm not a native English speaker either, by the way ;) I learned to speak English when I was ten. ...

You definitely helped ^^ I've made a few little changes as you suggested. Thanks! Xxx

The picture catches my eye, and I stop in my tracks, turning to face the image that I hold so dear. The casual snapshot of my grandfather, taken in what ...

Hey there, KJ. Loved by strangers and a hypnotizing sex symbol with her music. This sentence doesn’t flow so well. Restructure it, maybe? Something along the lines of “Loved by ...

Hey there ^_^ Here for the review, as requested! Review for part I. Your opening sentence is great - it caught my attention immediatly. By all means, do not change ...

Hey Dono, Here’s the review ^^ I know you prefer overall comments, and I’ll give them, but I’ll still point out some little things =] dying wish damning my body ...

^_^ Hey again. I didn’t have Mama’s eye. I'm not sure what you mean with this. “WHAT?” Personally I think lower case italics would look a better. Caps tend to ...

Hey there, I'll be nitpicky, if you don't mind :wink: and working on the belief that “us honourables should stick together,” Capitalize the H. Crash bang, punch flying, limbs flailing, ...

Hey ^^ I enjoyed reading this. It was a random fragment, yes, but it didn't matter so much. You developped everything good enough for this to stand on its own. ...

Hey there ^^ Hope the review is useful : I watched blue-white fire corse along the spine of my home causing the outer sphere to collapse. [s]corse[/s] course. Then I ...