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9/10 Nice car :) XxxDo

Hey Holly, I really liked this story!! Its so full of emotion, you really feel for the characters ! Great job, seriously. I hope my review is useful to you! ...

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Hey there GML As I said in chat, here's the review :D That story was amazing! It was just. .. wow! I hope the world never ends up like that, ...

Hey Holly, As promised in chat, here's the first review. I really enjoyed reading that, and am definetly going to go review the next chapters (once I've reviewed some work ...

Thank you a lot for your comments :D I'm going to edit it when I have the time, which will be after I mow my backyard.... stupid chores XD Anyway, ...

Oh, oops! Sorry bout that. :) XxxDo

Sorry! Then I completely misinterpreted your comment! Don't leave the YWS! XxxDo

So. Reviews. Any work in need of critiques, my dears? What I'll review: Adventure/Action Fiction Historical Fiction Romance Fiction Other Fiction Science Fiction Yes, basically all fiction except Fanf

"I'll review yours if you review mine?" That's not what I'm doing here! I've reviewed eight (or more) pieces of work from various authors, in-depth, in the past two days ...

Thank you for your comments!! I'm considering posting the next few chapters, but I think I might wait until anyone shows an interest in reviewing those too. Anyone? :wink: I'll, ...

Hey Saint I loved that chapter! The first one is awesome, and this one exceeds it, so you're at the level of absolute awesomeness right now :wink: PM me when ...

Hey Teddy This story was as good as the Séance ! I really enjoyed reading them and hope you'll be writing more soon! It was well-written, with good description and ...

Hey there, Teddy :wink: I enjoyed the story, it was really cool! I really liked the topic, with the Ouija board and the mystery. It was awesome. I hope my ...

Hey there As promised, here's the review :D I greatly enjoyed reading it, and am glad I did ! I'll take a look at chapter 2 once I've posted this ...