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How many books I have? Uhm I'll be counting for a while. Fiction: 124 in my room, then shelves full of books in my attic (that's where I store them ...

Hey, This story is well-written and contains a good buildup of tension. I think, though, that you could make it longer by adding more descriptions, or gestures, or other things ...

Welcome to the Young Writers Society ! I hope this place will be what you've been looking for in a writer's website :) PM me if there's anything you're not ...

Thanks for commenting! I'll work on my spelling, etc, mistakes as soon as I get the time to edit this story :D XxxDo

Thank you for the comment, and for the compliment :D I appreciate the suggestion about the Old Testament, but I'm not religious, and can hardly be called Agnostic, even, so ...

For the Murder & Investigation contest, here's the second part of the Murder & Mayhem series. Please read part one first. Hope you enjoy! Rip apart if you must :wink: ...

Banned for using an avatar of people that I don't know!

Thank you for the comment!! Good advice, thank you I'll consider changing "babe" into something else, because it is in no way meant to sound fake! Thanks for pointing it ...

Banned for having an avatar from the lion king! XxxDo

Hey guys, I find it pretty awesome that so many people gave their opinions! I'm all for hearing what you guys have to say, whether it is positive or negative ...

Thanks for the comment ! I'll work on the tense thing, the typos, and the pace of the story :D appreciate the advice !! XxxDo

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Haha !! I loved this !! It's hilarious :D There's a contest going on right now, (forgive me, for I know not how to link :wink: ) that's called "The ...

This piece is pretty ghastly, to be honest, so if you're squeamish, don't read it. It's sinister, and the antagonist is absolutely evil. This story seriously came from the darkest ...

Hey there, You're planning to use only one of the two prologues, right? I'd suggest using the first one, for it is much stronger than the second. Or you could ...