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The novel I'm working on is one that's been stealing away all my free time for quite a while now.:P The Darkness Within is the story of Jess Parker, a ...

Hey, I'll review your story soon, but just one side note: why don't you post the second chapter as a seperate topic?? It might attract more attention that way. Just ...

Thank you so much, all of you, for the reviews!!! You guys are amazing. In case you might be interested, I'll be posting more of this story very soon !! ...

Thank you for the review! I should have the next part posted soon but I must admit that I keep forgetting to >.>

Thanks for the commentS!! I'll be editing this piece, soon :) XxxDo

Hey, you Here's another review!! YAYS! :P Anyway, you know the drill, the review is in the attachment. Hope it's useful!! XxxDo

Thanks for the comments!! Shadepelt: Thanks, I agree, I should work on defining the characters more. WannaBeAuthor: Thanks!! XxxDo

Amazing. Well done. More in the attachment :D XxxDo

Nice prologue, Sarah!! Great job. I'll be reading more, for sure. I'm sorry that you're feeling this way, and hope life will deal you some happier cards soon. The review ...

Rated R for language and references to rape. Haunted. The school bell rings, and at once the classroom is filled with movement. I stand up, lift my bag onto my ...

I wonder sometimes as well, because it's odd how even if you're gone, the things you leave behind on the internet remain, and there's people who will never know of ...

Me :roll: This is the result of a late-night I-need-a-new-@%!*&?£-facebook-profile-picture moment, haha :D Edit: Hehe, it seems I just unintentionally ignored the "let's do pet pictures" thing. OMG a

Hey there, Here's the review of yet another magnificent piece of writing :P Xxx

Well done :D I loved that story!! Okay, I'm not gonna waste time writing here to get points XD I know you're waiting for the review. So, here you go ...

Thank you!!! Sorry about the length of the story, I have a very hard to suppress tendency to write in too much detail :wink: I'm editing it, big time, right ...