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For me it's only 9 pages in Microsoft Word, and that's when I use a big font o_O it's only 5,000 or so words! Plus, you didn't set a word ...

Here as per request ^^ Feel free to come back and leave me another piece to review, anytime. Only today was Thursday. Today was a Thursday would sound better. Clair ...

Done and done ^^ Now I'm off to review some works requested via PM's, but I think I'll be done soon. Anyone, want a review? *prods you* Xxx

Here as requested, KJ dearest! I enjoyed reading that - you write very well - and I think you've done a great job with developping the characters. You focus on ...

Hey there, Here as requested =] No. The one opposite me was breathing slightly. I watched her chest go up and down, sighing in the relief that I wasn’t responsible ...

Thanks for the comment! It's awesome that you've been a vegetarian since birth ^^ It's not too difficult to be a vegetarian over here, not now that I've figured out ...

*snuggles kitteh* Thanks for posting this, it's awesome. Don't want nitpicks ? Aww, but they're so fun to do. I'll do my best to resist the temptation >.> I love ...

Done, Teddy ^^ Edit: Done, kitteh dearest! Asxz, I'm off to review yours now. And yes, I've reviewed for you before... All the chapters of Split Personality that you've posted ...

Hey there, Connie dearest. Here as requested (though, I'm sorry, very late.) Just a few little nitpicks: Repetition. You use tormented, then tornmenters, almost consequtive sentences. The word "caw" i

Hey there, Teddy dearest! Here as requested ^_^ The new boy’s mother was pushing him in his wheelchair. The class stared at him, disbelieving their eyes. disbelieving their eyes isn't ...

Hey there, Connie dearest! ^^ The streets of the town were lonely, save for the dust that the breeze stirred up on occasion; forming into tiny vortexes that waltzed down ...

Stella dearest ^^ I came back to review part 3 as promised. As the other parts are, this one, too, is adorably cute. The entire concept may be prone to ...

Done, Poppy dearest ! Who's next? :wink: XxxDo

*salutes* Here as requested, Poppy dearest ! You've asked for an overall, so I'll be sure to do that. The occasional nitpick might appear randomly... I find it hard to ...

School craziness is currently manageable ... so this thread is officially re-opened! Also, I have a week of holiday right now. Reviewing spree? Sure thing. *Dusts off the old thread ...