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Hey there, Seeing as you have no reviews yet, I'm here to check your story out. It had been a morning filled with cherry blossoms, sprinkling the ground like candies ...

Ooh, shiny. The new site looks amazing, Nate. Very nice ^^ XxxDo

I will either be at a friend's house, or in a hotel with a friend, that night. I will listen if my friend doesn't mind me being online from midnight ...

Thank you for the review ^^ I appreciate it. XxxDo

Thank you for your review, it was helpful ^^ and I'm glad you liked the story so far. I've added in a short paragraph where she sees herself, as you ...

If this story looks familiar to you, don't be surprised - you've probably seen it before. This is an edited version of my novel that was previously called The Darkness ...

*snuggleloves* thanks for the review, dear ^^ I'll edit the story soon. XxxDo

The window frames are empty, save for the occasional canine teeth of glass against the darkness of the room beyond. Not a single one is properly in place, even the ...

Smile #1: I played with my little cousin today, and because I was acting like an idiot to entertain her (she's five) she laughed. Her laughing makes me laugh, always. ...

ZOMG ME!!1!!one! *clears throat* If you would, please ^^ Thank you, dear! XxxDo

Hello, dear ^^ I've got something in need of reviewing, if you have the time. XxxDo

Thanks for the review, dear ^^ I'll consider making the suggested changes! XxxDo

I'm not entirely sure where this story is going, but I've got some vague ideas in my head. It will be continued, though, and hopefully soon. Nitpicks, as well as ...

I like the style you've used in the first chapter, the first-person life story grabbed my attention and held it. I read it once, and all I could really say ...

Here as requested :] I decided that, after Ohagi put me to bed, I would kill my father. I don't think you need the first comma. not a dead one, ...