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Hard to get meaning with all the words and, well, words. ( :D How is what Claudette said different than what I said. :D )

WORDY (And I know wordy, haha)

...sometimes you cannot approach a piece of work as a writer. I'm not entirely sure why you brought that up, anyhow. If you would like to discuss which posts are ...

Half the 'good' of any slam piece is the reading. Lots of shouting and anger and passion. I needed to get this on paper and out of my mouth, even ...

I think Lama's point about age is that what you find amusing or appropriate to talk about may not be necessarily appropriate for the younger kids here. Please don't censor ...

Glad to meet you LamaLama. Q: Have you begun to sketch your four year exit plan? (If you read my works, you will notice that I truly am a YOUNG ...

Suicide is is an individuals ultimate choice (*like abortion*). I do not think you should use the word we. Especially since you switched from us to you in the first ...

"Dry Hump" -SlickJimmy To say hello was a novel cadence To embrace hands expectedly tense -Those feelings became proper. Topical coffee gave way to our smarts And steered the course ...

Also- i think these two bits could be sung HIGHer pitch if you know what I mean... Yes, that is what I meant. These phrases are a slower romantic melody ...

Having current difficulties with this particular subject, your title forced me to open this piece immediately. Following it was easy, appears to portray hope. We all love to hope. However, ...

You guys are awesome! Keep up the great comments.

I dont think there was anything wrong with it at all. I thought it was great FUN! Be certain to check out episode #2, which is now posted. Also, planned ...

Hello Everyone: Since everyone had such fun with my first post, I decided to set another one ahead of schedule. Episode #2 Rating- (L5) (D0.5) (M2) (P2.5) (H-n/a) This is ...

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I liked it, though it felt rough in places because sometimes you rhymed, and sometimes you didn't. It was a lot of repeating, which got on my nerves a little ...