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I want to see a new avatar for Nate. The monkey is starting to kindaza freak me out.

sweet. mwaahaahaa. Does it have to be the FIRST sentence, or simply the cause of inspiration, and used anywhere.

Well if we are able to choose the same one, I want #3 too! Can we use swear words?

DANG. Why is it that welcome messages bring out the dork in everyone? Well, I am not one to break a chain, so.... HI! My name is Slick and I ...

Just a note- According to dictionary.com: Cliche'- a phrase or word that has lost its original effectiveness or power from overuse In a poem, cliche is circumstantial. Since this entire ...

interesting? YES! Acceptable? NO! This is an exciting concept you have here, but difficult to pull off. As a reader, I had trouble with the voice, and the emphasis. ewwww, ...

NO one is allowed to call dibs on crayons.... I chose blue, if anyone else wants to do blue, and put me to shame with your metaphoric proweness, which probably ...

teeheehee

I think I am going to like you worgs. You got enough blah blah blah in your posts to actually stand toe to toe with bob. I aint got the ...

Hmmmmm..... very interesting. Something I will have to read again to see if it really sinks in as deep as it should. Hmmmmm....

kindaza plain for such a powerful topic. but it def gets the message across. nice work, easy to read.

ok, here is my thought on this.... Interperative? Song? Crap? This was VERY easy to read through (less the grammer and puctuation that brad spoke of), and VERY interesting to ...

ok, I agree with ani, but on a more severe scale. I acthidently bit my toungue from reading thith, and it ith now bleeding, justh a little. But it hurtth ...

I was about to read this, but then stopped. You can't toute it as an awaard winning poem and not reveal to us the award. I loved the last poem ...

This is very close to amazing. it really hits home for me since I am newly divorced and miss my five year old son every second of the day. I ...