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Ok, everyone, you can either critique this piece, or write which genre of music do you think this song would be best supplied? Try and back it up with an ...

Oh dearest, NO, never as a BOOK! -the Halo Yeah, books are too, um, literal? -Pink Bunny Ok, this is very fun, next question is mine: Would you ever lie ...

Well dear, you know for about 8 months now, Pink Bunny has been in recovery for alcoho.... -the Halo Hey, two-shoes, they dont need to be hearin about that. Why ...

Ok, everyone, you can either critique this piece, or write which genre of music do you think this song would be best supplied? Try and back it up with an ...

Can anyone say 'this topic has gone off topic' :P? From reading Jimmy's post, I have come to the conclusion that, actually, asking a girl how she likes her limes ...

Rating women? That sounds awfully archaic.... Do you have kids? How old? More like rating the potential of the date.

My new girlfriend -SlickJimmy I can’t believe your ignoring my phone calls I can’t believe your blocking my emails I can’t believe you won’t see me no more You are ...

I was pretty sad. I will work on it

An Ode to Divorce, a.k.a Wendy’s Last Poem -SlickJimmy I feel so sad Because I did not learn I feel so ashamed Because I did not learn I am so ...

Hey toots, I am a lover, we leave the fighting up to others. -Pink Bunny Oh, please Pink Bunny, fighting is not of the physical only. If you consider that ...

PET PEEVES> "as though". ick (x2) runing through trees= metephoric jogging becomes out of place. YWS needs to have a category for first drafts.

Hello Joy *as I begin to jump* I am so glad you are here. If you need a critique ask myth or snoik. I am not very good at giving ...

Hello Everyone: Since my divorce, I have been on a few dating pages. Results have not been very good, but I am going to share some of the adventures with ...

I otta out u (400 words) -SlickJimmy A roll of the tongue And twist of the mind Unbearable prose Seems so unkind My struggle is great To complete your thought ...

Thank you for your critique, Bob.