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Thank you! I hadn't thought about the third stanza being about throwing up, but it makes a lot of sense. :) Thanks again!

Thank you so much! I really appreciate it.

Thanks so much! I agree about insecurities vs insecurity. :)

Thank you very much!

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Thanks so much! I really get what you're saying, and I'll keep it in mind.

Thank you so much! :) Is there anything I could improve upon?

Thank you so much! I'll think about changing the rhyme scheme or removing it altogether, that would make sense. I really loved reading this review, thanks again!

Thank you so much! I agree about the "first chair" vs "third chair" thing, and I like your revision! Now that I think about it, that line does stick out ...

Thank you so much! I'll modify the last verse to make it a bit different from the first.

Hello! Thanks so much, and I agree. I'll try to keep these in mind as I rework the poem. :)

Thank you so much! I was trying to change tenses throughout the poem to show the change in perfect girl, but I sort of realized that it didn't work halfway ...

Wow, thank you so much for this review! I really see what you're getting at with some of the style and plot things, and I'll definitely take those into account. ...

Thank you! I agree about the lack of punctuation, but I think I'll add a period at the end just like you said. I really loved getting this review, thanks ...