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Re: Saying Goodbye
I really liked it very facinating very short precise and straight to the point you needed to say one thing, and you said that one thing you didn't ramble you ...
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Re: Pythems End
The days went by slowly. Just as I had hoped. For I was dreading the moment when I would have to leave forever. This had been my life, for a ...
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Re: Bird Song
I like this because it shows reality in another format it;s an interesting interpretation a very interesting one I really wouldn't expect that, when you hear the words bird song ...
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Re: All That It Took
I agree with the comments above I thought it was sad and sweet. I thought that it was possibly lacking a little bit of information I don't know but you ...
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Re: The Dalek Doctor - Part 1
Oh my god I love doctor who. and that was truly amazing i could totally imagine it the whole thing but then liking the program helped it don't think it ...
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Re: spin the bottle
“It’s your turn Kirsten, truth, Dare, Donkey dare, Love, kiss, Life?” I shouted with excitement! “Um Truth” Kirsten whispered to me I could tell that she didn’t like to be ...
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Re: Trains
Hey what gave you the inspiration, very unique and unexpected from a poem gathering that you take an interest in trains? yet whenever anyone writes something, it always has to ...
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Re: Your eyes
everyone else has done all the nit picking now so there isn't much left for me to say but I can praise. This poem is very good, I connected with ...
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Re: In need of things to read
look in my portfolio I need some review for a few of mine especially the incredible journey snap Molly thanks
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Re: sarah
This is not emo.!!!! I wrote this when my Granddad died. Meaning I was upset, there fore I am not an emo. But I can't tell whether it is sarcasm ...
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Re: The World is a Circus
everyone else, has spotted the errors, but other than that it is very good. a solid piece of work has all the elements needed and I really like the rhyming ...
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Re: Unseen
this is really sweet, and very sad the other people have done all the nit picky stuff so I'm over with that. I like the fact it's based on judging ...
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Re: sarah
There’s a girl who sits in the corner, Grieving of her father’s death No one bothers to cheer her up, They are too busy having fun. No one knows how ...
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Re: Letter to You
Awwwwwwwwwwwwr that is so sad for your first time, it really is very good. your enjoyment has certainly paid off so has your reading I love the idea, that you ...
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Re: Top 5 Worst Books You Ever Read
Look. Nothing I read is bad, because I read the blurb, if i don;t like it then forget it I don't read it so forget it. lol Anyway, it is ...
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