defendthelegend

This is really good lyrics flows well and very moving but it sounds incomplete hoever!

What am I to do, When I feel like this? All your love around me, is what I really miss!

I live in a land of sorrow, Where all I feel is pain. you have nothing to give, you burst my dreams into flames.

Hello EpsonBelenus, Your lyrics: choices long loathing on a wall, are set out in a completly different way to what one would normall exect, this however could defeat the whole ...

hey this poem is really good Not too long not too short =)

Hello :] I would love to review. Gramatical Structure Overall, the layout and structure, is fine. But could be better, by decreasing the amount written on certain lines. But, it ...

Hello I agree with both of the others, you did suffer a few grammatical problems, but then that is expected, but overall I thought that was a really good piece ...

Hello Everyone else has pretty much covered everything I was going to say, but to be honest that was really good. It flowed really well and I really enjoyed reading ...

Hello, I know this was written like 4 or 5 years ago, but I still would like to review it. but what I am really thinking is: wow this is ...

Dear Woman and Man, You say you’re my parents but you’re truly not you were never there for me you didn’t hug me good night you never read to me ...

Heya :D I am going to review your work today. There is only one true beast left on earth; a beast so powerful, a beast so strong, a beast so ...

I silently crept back into the classroom, and sat down at the back. Hopefully it wasn’t obvious that I had been gone. For, my seat is right at the back, ...

short and sweet just how I like it. It really is very good and you should be proud You don't need any more information put in there maybe just put ...

Hello :D If you do not mind (although it will be too late by the time I have submitted this) I would like to review your poem. So here we ...

Hello don't be so negative! it isn't as bad as you made out. Infact I really likke it evers so much! well done!