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Re: Needs and Wants
There’s a buring pain inside me, a sense that a love has gone, why did you have to go? for you have done no wrong. I can’t go on like ...
May 28, 2010 -
Re: Let me go home
I'm weak, you did this to me, you took me away. Return me. I don't want to fall I don't want to drown I don't want to feel alone I ...
Mar 28, 2010 -
Re: Social Networking sites
Cutt me off from the world, Change my personality. Hurt me, infest my personal life, go, take my secrets and share them. Spread your gossip. I hate you so much. ...
Mar 28, 2010 -
Re: Just Another Day
Hello I am going to review this Here we go again Crystal said (said is a boring word, try using something different, to balance out your vocabulary, if you are ...
Mar 21, 2010 -
Re: Isabel
yes,I agree with the above It does sound like it is based on personal experience of some sort? If it isnt then you have got a great mind XD. This ...
Mar 1, 2010 -
Re: Just Standing
wow what an original idea. I write poetry, but this is one of the first times I have come across something like this. People tend to write less of these ...
Mar 1, 2010 -
Re: Oh Gray Threads!
this is a really good poem. I love all the contrast It is such a good idea When i saw the title i was thinking oh boring i will look ...
Feb 28, 2010 -
Re: Oh Gray Threads!
this is a really good poem. I love all the contrast It is such a good idea When i saw the title i was thinking oh boring i will look ...
Feb 28, 2010 -
Re: Questions/Answers
because you dont have to sit there waiting for something to come to you, you have a title a topic and you can set to work right away, showing what ...
Feb 28, 2010 -
Re: Need Help Writting a Peom
poems come naturally, you cant really have help writing one, think of a topic, base it on something you feel strongly about, a passion, or an emotion you are feeling ...
Feb 28, 2010 -
Re: Name Me Some Poets!
John keats - he wrote a really good poem called to autumn, many students in the U.K study him for qualifications in english litrature. Sylvia Plathe - one of the ...
Feb 28, 2010 -
Re: Is It Wrong?
You get ideas, they make a poem in minutes, you get ideas, they give you a stanza, you wait for your next set of ideas, it really should depend on ...
Feb 28, 2010 -
Re: Punctuating Dialogue: a question?
Have you ever thought, that the use of social networking sites, MSN, and texting, influences the younger generations, to stop caring about spelling, and punctuation? It seems to me, that ...
Feb 28, 2010 -
Re: Harry Potter 3OH!3 song parody
This is hilerious (however you spell that) It really fits in very well. I was listening to the song at the same time, and it was perfectly in time. well ...
Feb 28, 2010 -
Re: Without You
Hello =) Overall I think that generally it is a nice well written piece. But however, I think that it could flow better. As your poem is a rhyming poem, ...
Feb 27, 2010
