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I haven't seen you around here before, so let me start by welcoming you to YWS! :smt039 We are all really nice here, and we hardly ever bite. When we ...

Thanks so much for your reviews, guys :D Olivia 1987: Thanks for reading! Going back over this, I did make Jade seem quite a lot younger, something I'll correct ASAP. ...

Hello prospective reader! This is the beginning of a short piece I'm putting together. The first bit, we will call it the introduction, is rather corny and I need to ...

Mwahahahah, it is me! I am STALKING YOUR POSTS! Well, seeing as I'm all out of 'Michelangelo's Day and Night', I thought I'd read through your other big and popular ...

Hey Ashley! Sorry it took me so long to review this. I actually read it as soon as you posted it, but I forgot to write my crit :oops: Oh ...

Ah, you didn't disappoint. This was as good as the last one. Is it me, or do I detect a hint of homo-sexuality to this romance? If so, more power ...

Greetings! An interesting story you have here. It has certainly grabbed at my attention, even though it would appear that few 'attention-grabbing' events have occured in this first chapter. Take ...

Aw, you had me on the verge of tears this time round, Ash. I'm not sure why. Maybe it's the combination of all the little bits you've changed in part ...

Thanks heaps for your comments guys. I did a bit of a re-write and I'm trying to make things clearer, but I have a feeling I'm a few more edits ...

Here is the second installment! Everything may still seem a little confusing, but I promise you will have full knowledge of the location and situation within the next few installments. ...

A break in the clouds allowed a single thread of buttery light hit the ocean before the sun disappeared behind the horizon. I don’t think I would ever know if ...

Ah, you've done well with working in the tone of sorrow. I haven't picked up on any areas in need of nit-picking, so I'll get straight to the important stuff ...

The sky cried with open sorrow, the clouds parting to reveal a downpour of acid tears that stung the faces of those who were unlucky enough to feel such a ...

Ah, thunder is a great song. I like Hero Heroine better... Anywho, lets talk about your story. Well I don't know about your other comments calling it 'too perfect'. In ...

Thanks for commenting everyone. I really appreciate it :) I guess in my wanting to make this first part fast and vivid, I completely skipped over descriptions of Raewyn's attacker. ...