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Now, I was a little nervous about posting this up here. I'm not sure whether I like it or not. But hey, you can just tell me if it's really ...

Tut tut, beccy ec. You're not 18 yet. You've still got 11 days. Oh, and you'd better give a couple of reviews before you post again. Those are the rules ...

This is the final of this little story (I think). My perticular concern is to do with the amount of swearing in the argument. I might have overdone it a ...

Icaruss: Lol, I'm glad at least someone got that it's a flashback. Yeah, I know it's not finished. It's a long and complicated story. Hmm... I guess the flashback is ...

Thanks again for the comments, guys. xGraceex: Thanks, love. I'm glad you liked it :D I agree with you about the age thing. The law can't factor in everyone's individual ...

Lol, of all the things I thought this might get compared to, Twilight certainly wasn't the top of my list :D Disturbing, yes. Reality often is. Hmm... perhaps I've posted ...

Looky here, I have some catching up to do. You've posted 3 whole chapters in my absence! He greets me with a smile that lights up the room and a ...

Oh no, how could you, Ashley?! How could you leave me so unsatisfied? You cruel person! Not continuing? :smt089 I swallow and rise my head, just as Evander enters, with ...

Widowed at only twelve years of age and pregnant. Wow, twelve? Are you sure that the ancients would trade away their daughters at such a young age? I know of ...

Thanks for reading. :) The flashback is relevant in the whole scheme of things, but I understand that it doesn't feel that way. This story has a circular structure, where ...

Wow, was it really that bad? EEk, perhaps it should be chucked into the 'Do Not Continue' bin. The dividing paragraph in bold actually marks the beginning of a flash ...

Hello hello hello! Okay, this is an experimental piece. This is not my usual writing style, but I thought I might try something different. Be warned, it might come across ...

Hello! :smt006 Your story looked so sad with no reviews, so I'll remedy that for you. First, a bit of nit-picking! Collin was perhaps the most sought after boy in ...

My world was overturned the day you entered it, a whirlwind seeking out all sense, logic and reason, mercilessly destroying it. You were everything that I wasn’t, helping me do ...

Back again! :smt109 Hmm, still big blocks of text here. :smt119 Split your paragraphs in half again. It just makes it easier to read. Now, to my review! Sarah has ...