daydreamer9

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fan of pirates: big captain's hat and peg leg? ;]

"I've done enough."

So very true! Grrr. . . I wish I wasn't though. +++++++ TPBM is exhausted.

This is a very complex piece for me and I think it's a little hard to review. Maybe it's because I enjoyed the story so much! First off, your dialogue ...

All in all, I think this a great first chapter. There are a few gramatical errors and some other suggections I have for you though. First of all, you say ...

I would like to thank all the people who previously posted a review on this story. Thank you so much. Your advice was incredibly helpful. People always asked me what ...

I think you are off to a good start. A few things did confuse me, but overall it was entertaining. Who is Eagle? and if he gave Jackson money which ...

I'm afraid of my ideas being stolen. yikes! I hold a lot of my stories close to my heart and the thought of one being reprinted by someone else really ...

Hey Mary! I'm new too! But don't worry, everyone here is really kind and open. The best thing to do is read others works, just to get yourself acquainted to ...

This is a very true poem is very true. Too many people look out of a 'tainted window'. My only advice is, if possible to find a stronger end word. ...

Real poetry should capture you and take you into a deep state of emotion. Never have I felt so compassionate about a character in a poem. This is an amazing ...

Of course! Where you say: "I woke up to the sound of footsteps. I raised my head, and saw three humans walk in. They smelled..sad." You could possibly do something ...

I'll make sure too! and thanks, I at least hope it's interesting. The title of my story is "CIGAM". CIGAM stands for Central Institute for Gifted and Advnaced Minors. That ...

This is sounds like a very interesting contest! What you have is quite heart touching. You've laid a good foundation, but I believe you could improve it. I suggest that ...