daydreamer9

Burning through like the paper, Wrote on with your unfulfilled words.

Hey Gale! Welcome to YWS. :] Everyone here is very kind and very helpful. If you ever need any help navigating around the site, PM (private message) me. Anyways, congrats ...

Overall, I thought this was a good piece. I have some notes though. First of all, there are some rules here YWS that are important to follow. So every story ...

Granted, but there you're taken hostage and made to live in a small hut the rest of your life. I wish I could get some more sleep.

Hey God! I never thought that I would die so young. . .wait, never mind. :wink: Sorry, that was my attempt at a joke. Failed. Anyway, here is my review. ...

Hey MySunshine! Welcome to YWS. :] I think you'll soon realise that practically everyone here is willing to spread the "sunshine". People are very kind and are willing to review ...

Hmmm. . very true. I tend to repeat this poem in my mind almost everyday. "Who am I?" It's a repeating theme seen often in every day life. I liked ...

Wow. This absolutely positively AMAMZING! :] Very rarely do I come across a poem that I do not have a critique for. Well, today, I have. This poem is very ...

Ha ha. Well belated welcome to YWS! (Even though you've been here longer than me.) I think I've seen you around in the Randomness Forum. I'll see yuo around. :] ...

This poem portrays very well the seductive personality of alchol. I think this poem is really good, and have only a few critiques. Wherever you go, you hear me, I ...

Hi, Liz! Welcome to YWS. :] You'll feel right at home here. The people are really kind and welcoming, as I'm sure you've already realized. I'd love to read your ...

banned for being poisonous.

hmmm. . . I like it! 8/10~ (We all need some sunshine.)

Overall, I think this was a good poem. It does need some editing though. Here are my critiques: Who hope that one day they can take their own lives Who ...

Hey! Welcome to YWS. :] As I'm sure many have told you, before you post your own work, it's asked that you take some times to review others. This way, ...