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Re: Would You, Life, Revenge, apocalyps, Still not getting any
Hey!!! I saw that you haven't had any reviews. Maybe if you post this in poetry than more people will view it. I'm about to go eat food right now, ...
Feb 11, 2009 -
Re: Steps.
Hey, let me just say, I find this piece remarkable! I'm dd9 by the way, and on this night, I will be reviewing this wonderful piece of poetry. First of ...
Feb 11, 2009 -
Re: Because
Hey Warrior! I'm dd9, your some-what flawed review for tonight. I'm going to go through your piece with my advice in bold, FYI. Oh Because You never tried You shouldn't ...
Feb 11, 2009 -
Re: True and false Love
Hey GAM. I'm dd9 and I'll be doing a little (maybe more like meduim sized) review for you this lovely day. First of all, I really liked this poem. I ...
Feb 11, 2009 -
Re: Hello!!
Hey BeauWriter! Welcome to YWS, my friend! I’m dd9. It’s a pathetic excuse for a nickname, but I like it anyway! :] Let’s get down to business. Here at YWS, ...
Feb 10, 2009 -
Re: I'm bad at subject lines so....CHEESE
Hey DL! (is it alright if I call you that? let me know.) Even though so many people have already welcomed you, I thought I should as well. So, welcome ...
Feb 10, 2009 -
Re: Bite The Bullet
Hey Eimear! I'm dd9. Anywho, here is my critique. If it stinks, my apologizes ahead of time. Make friends with the rain, sing to the big brass moon I think ...
Feb 10, 2009 -
Re: Not Enough
Hey! I'm dd9 and I'll be doing a little review today. :] First of all, I have to say that I love the fact that you have an exclamation point ...
Feb 10, 2009 -
Re: What's shakin' spunky groove monkey?
Happy birthday! :] And welcome to YWS Syuka. Firs of all, I just have to say that you said "anywho"! I always say that and it's good to know that ...
Feb 10, 2009 -
Re: The only part worth telling (revised)
thanks for all your reviews! I am finally going through and making all the corrections that were suggested. Muchos gracias!
Feb 10, 2009 -
Re: poem-Yes, we need to know
Hey! I'm dd9. I'll be doing a little review for you today. :] I think you have a good concept here, but to be honest, the poem does need some ...
Feb 10, 2009 -
Re: Brand new... Looking for writer friends
Welcome inksword! You're screenname perfectly matches YWS. If you haven't seen the logo at the top of the screen, it's a sword and a pencil. Ink and sword. Very cool! ...
Feb 10, 2009 -
Re: Hey =]
Welcome Anna to YWS! I'm sure that you'll love it here. It's basically a family of writers. We all help each other and go out of our way to make ...
Feb 9, 2009 -
Re: Hello YWS
Hello! Even though you've recieved so many welcomes, I have some more. Welcome, welcome, welcome to YWS. :] As some have already pointed out, this is, in fact a nuthouse. ...
Feb 9, 2009 -
Re: Pen names
Fumiyo for the the first name. This name means well-read generation and because you are spreading your writing to the public, you are in fact encouraging a "well-read generation". *The ...
Feb 8, 2009
