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:( sniff sniff! It's over ;) Okay! Good chapter, I like the sentence you chose for Scott, but I agree with everyone else, just a little longer would be good, ...

Hey! Good chapter! Like all that family bonding and nice fighting stuff! I also agree that getting a little more information about why Silas is so evil would be good. ...

Wow!! Great chapters, I just finished reading 16 and 17 and I loved it! Nothing to complain about here, just can't wait to see what happens next! I didn't see ...

Great chapter!! not much else to say about it, everything has pretty much been said... Besides getting myself a job, I’d never done much on my own; ... She did ...

Ok!! Good chapter, but with some small issues! I agree with WritingSpitfire about the shower idea, it really bugged me when I read it.... I don't know if it's an ...

Hi Tanya!! Nice chapter once again! :D I disagree with Lauren on the nice view comment, I think it's really funny and it makes me want to read more about ...

Hi!! Wow sorry for the lack of comments on your previous chapters Tanya, I just don't have much to say, it's just great!! I dig that story a whole lot, ...

This was pretty cool! :D really enjoyed it! I did expect the dog to maybe be a human, but I never would've thought the parents had anything to do at ...

Hi!! wow!! I like that story a whole bunch and I'm really excited to know what will happen next, and exactly how it will become fantasy (though I have big ...

Hi!! Sorry for being so late in commenting this my friend! I think that is a really good addition to your story, and I don't think it's too long at ...

Yay!! Action packed chapter 2! I like it a whole bunch! I think it's perfect this time, thanks for adding the mirror part, makes me believe in her a lot ...

Hehe! nope, definitely not easy being bilingual ;) so please people forgive me, because I'm one of these strange people too, and English isn't my mother tongue! Okay, I'm one ...