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davantageous

  • Novel / Chapter » General, General Re: Down the road.

    The dream was the same as it always was lately. Three days without a shower and even in his sleep he could smell feet and feverish sweat, but still the ...

    Oct 18, 2011
  • Novel / Chapter » General, General Re: Down the road.

    Really enjoyed it, the transitions. Keep writing.

    Oct 18, 2011
  • Novel / Chapter » General, General Re: N/A

    I don't know how else to say the best thing I have read today and since i get points from reviewing this i will send you a gift. epic.... man

    Oct 18, 2011
  • Novel / Chapter » General, General Re: Serpent's Teeth [5]

    Whoah>>>>>>>>>>>.wow.....................uhhhhhhhhhhhh.........ok......i love it. amazingly.........

    Oct 18, 2011
  • Novel / Chapter » General, General Re: Serpent's Teeth [5]

    i love it. amazingly.........

    Oct 18, 2011
  • Novel / Chapter » General, General Re: Clouds

    I do not know what to label this type of writing , but it definitely was interesting to read. It contained elements of dialectic thought and character views of other ...

    Oct 18, 2011
  • Novel / Chapter » Fanfiction, General Re: The story of Pegasus

    In the early hours of the morning, when the sky was lit from the sun even before it had poked its face above the horizon, a rooster crowed it's song ...

    Oct 18, 2011
  • Short Story » General, General Re: Sportsmanship

    great continuity and flow. love the thematic elements and the intense dramatic moments in the plot itself. Keep it up

    Oct 17, 2011
  • Short Story » Action / Adventure, General Re: Ced/As Make-out Scene-MAJOR EDITS.

    Weird in a good way. A bit disturbing the thought of someone walking in on this.

    Oct 17, 2011
  • Short Story » General, General Re: Hello. (Contest entry)

    love it, as well as the song "Hello", EVANESCENCE is smashing!!!!!

    Oct 17, 2011
  • Short Story » General, General Re: nothing

    great plot.

    Oct 17, 2011
  • Novel / Chapter » Fanfiction, General Re: The story of Pegasus

    Oct 16, 2011
  • Novel / Chapter » Fanfiction, General Re: The story of Pegasus

    thanks. I am so glad that it put a smile on your face

    Oct 16, 2011
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, General Re: Hidden- Chapter Nine

    I know what to say, except not how to say it. I love this story. The end. It is legit.

    Oct 16, 2011
  • Poetry » Other, General Re: I miss the Rain

    Dost thou knowst know What you mean to me? O , keeper of my sanity You showed me the beauty of sadness You accepted my ragged heart You were patient ...

    Oct 16, 2011


“Isn't it nice to think that tomorrow is a new day with no mistakes in it yet?”
— L.M. Montgomery, Anne of Green Gables