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Re: Black Bird
Nothing more than an amazing poem. nothing needs to be changed for this to be better. I understand everything said and can identify with what you said. This is talent ...
Oct 21, 2011 -
Re: Misshaped Words Revised
More often than not, my words are skewed, by those not fond of the poets feud. Among the worst, are those who are ignorant and confused. And these who are ...
Oct 21, 2011 -
Re: The Good Seed: Part 3
Food, after a lack-thereof, is a powerful narcotic. My body floods with endorphins, every part of me blushes and flutters. The air sweeps over my skin in Technicolor, cool bursts ...
Oct 20, 2011 -
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The usually bored-looking, acne-ridden guy at the fish and chip shop watched me with interest. The few scattered people all spared me long glances as I picked up the pace ...
Oct 19, 2011 -
Re: deleted
“I’ll stop being an evil bastard when it stops making you laugh.” I stopped laughing abruptly, and he frowned. “Dyl...” I hesitated, but his hazel eyes urged me to go ...
Oct 19, 2011 -
Re: Atlantis - Cover Art. (Done in Photoshop - Draft).
I love the cover. The fact that you actually produced the image in Photoshop is amazing. Love the title. Would definitely read if this was a book.
Oct 19, 2011 -
Re: Down the road.
The dream was the same as it always was lately. Three days without a shower and even in his sleep he could smell feet and feverish sweat, but still the ...
Oct 18, 2011 -
Re: Down the road.
The dream was the same as it always was lately. Three days without a shower and even in his sleep he could smell feet and feverish sweat, but still the ...
Oct 18, 2011 -
Re: Down the road.
Really enjoyed it, the transitions. Keep writing.
Oct 18, 2011 -
Re: A Void
The walls have trapped me Contained inside a void Your "wisdom" is ignorance You prey off people's fears But your strengths aren't my weaknesses Your long gaze into a lifeless ...
Oct 18, 2011 -
Re: Chapter One part 2 and Chapter 2 part 1
The only person who met my eyes on my way to the library was a boy, about 11 years of age, covered with dust and grime, hair brown and eyes ...
Oct 18, 2011 -
Re: Death Amongst The Shadows Chapter 2
I don't know how else to say the best thing I have read today and since i get points from reviewing this i will send you a gift. epic.... man
Oct 18, 2011 -
Re: We All Have A History Behind
was waiting for it; I knew that he would come back for me. It’s not just a dream when you see yourself haunted, it is being haunted even if you’re ...
Oct 18, 2011 -
Re: Serpent's Teeth [5]
Whoah>>>>>>>>>>>.wow.....................uhhhhhhhhhhhh.........ok......i love it. amazingly.........
Oct 18, 2011 -
Re: Serpent's Teeth [5]
i love it. amazingly.........
Oct 18, 2011