davantageous

Misshaped Words-Davant Marshall More often than not, my words are skewed, by those not fond of the poets feud. Among the worst, are those who are ignorant and confused. And ...

EVANESCENCE - WHAT YOU WANT Do what you what you want, if you have a dream for better Do what you what you want till you don't want it anymore ...

docile bear

psychological

This nearly brought back memories of my long forgotten yet not too far gone childhood. This is perfectly written and simply easy to read. The fact that it is a ...

a few minor spelling mistakes....... I was one of those, Abigail and I where in my room were I got ready to get on in the car and when't to ...

Again, review your work before submitting it to be evaluated by the world. This ensures two things: no annoying comments about minor errors and you become a more talented writer. ...

Coloured candy canes hung off its thick branches. I listened to the Christmassy songs happily. Breathing in , I could smell the delicious Christmas dinner cooking. A turkey bulged with ...

I did my best, With what I possessed; I used my mind but the answers were hard to find

I love this poem. It is a unique reflection of the stillness in life. Keep it up. In the deathly silence of the night, Shadows creep out From the closet ...

I like it. It is different for sure and funny; as well as very loyal to the team . I like the fact it sounds like a song, or at ...

Wow. Great poem. Love the intensity in the tone and how it is used to create emotional responses. The poem itself displays the talent possessed by the author, who i ...

overall great poem. The sun bearing down on the river We watch the water stand still, I want to remember The way your eyes kill. The way your eyes doth ...

Among the worst, are those who are ignorant and confused and these are prone to judge are bereft without a clue. new second stanza

He was just lying there. Doing nothing. Torak’s dad was on the hard, cobbled ground with dig marks and slashes across his face. Torak felt helpless, with himself in immense ...