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davantageous

  • Lyric Poetry Re: Poetry and Pillow talk

    He and I share everything comma from glass jars filled with hopes written on torn paper edges to the last slice of pizza on rainy Friday nights. great beginning We ...

    Oct 28, 2011
  • General Fiction Novels Re: Wherever You Will Go Chapters 1-3

    there will be more today but not now..........

    Oct 27, 2011
  • General Fiction Novels Re: Wherever You Will Go Chapters 1-3

    It was then that I realised , as a naive child, that nobody is invincible no matter who they are. realized Here is another example of the fascinating talent it ...

    Oct 27, 2011
  • Other Poetry Re: Life Cycle Of A Helium Balloon

    Look at them: resilient and lighter than air a tail of ribbons fashioned into helices Good beginning. They push at the ceiling optimistically bobbing; attempting to escape into space. However[color=#F

    Oct 27, 2011
  • Dramatic Poetry Re: I, Too

    may i borrow this......for realz...... really good poem.Quality work and authentic swag to it. I know swag is not appropriate for describing a poem but it just happened. Great work, ...

    Oct 26, 2011
  • Dramatic Poetry Re: If A Thought Is Worth A Penny...

    Wow, where do i begin? This poem is amazingly well written and contains an enormous amount of talent. You, are the next big thing in poetry. I might even be ...

    Oct 26, 2011
  • Dramatic Poetry Re: Gamophobe

    The fish es jump over the bridge, soaring upstream to reach the high waters. They catch plump flies, green, that hover just below silver boughs which in the sunlight do ...

    Oct 24, 2011
  • Art & Photography Re: Cheesecake Icon

    Its not only the most unique icon made in gimp, but its cheesecake ..too.....shaking my head.

    Oct 23, 2011
  • Lyric Poetry Re: Life

    I agree wholeheartedly with this poem. Punctuated as it might be, it was accurate and simply effortless. Sometimes life is always hard, can't seem to ever play the right card. ...

    Oct 23, 2011
  • Other Poetry Re: Wishes and Fishes

    First let me say it is the shortest poem I have ever reviewed. Not only that, but i like the flawless effort you put into writing this mini poem. It ...

    Oct 22, 2011
  • Lyric Poetry Re: Where did it all go wrong?

    I never said that I'd be there for you, that I'd care for you. I never meant that I would stay with you, I never wanted to. We never had ...

    Oct 22, 2011
  • Lyric Poetry Re: Where did it all go wrong?

    I never said that I'd be there for you, that I'd care for you. I never meant that I would stay with you, I never wanted to. Great opening

    Oct 22, 2011
  • Narrative Poetry Re: The Devil's Balconies

    Come, me merry Gents and Misses, and hear me morbid tale o'twist'us, Ye fear the sound revenge insist'us, as a weary yeep o' mist encrypt'us. not sure what to make ...

    Oct 22, 2011
  • Fantasy Short Stories Re: Into the Darkness

    WOW. Where hace you been all this time.? First, my hat is off to you for pulling this off. Second, yo deserve respect for putting gemstone colors in the story. ...

    Oct 22, 2011
  • Other Re: Cruelty thy name is......

    Chronological routine......i like it. Original to you and definitely one of a kind. A fitting reminder of how cruel, the morning actually can be.....sometimes........always. The level of detail used i

    Oct 22, 2011


It's easier to come up with new stories than it is to finish the ones you already have. I think every author would feel that way.
— Stephanie Meyer