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Re: Poetry and Pillow talk
He and I share everything comma from glass jars filled with hopes written on torn paper edges to the last slice of pizza on rainy Friday nights. great beginning We ...
Oct 28, 2011 -
Re: Wherever You Will Go Chapters 1-3
there will be more today but not now..........
Oct 27, 2011 -
Re: Wherever You Will Go Chapters 1-3
It was then that I realised , as a naive child, that nobody is invincible no matter who they are. realized Here is another example of the fascinating talent it ...
Oct 27, 2011 -
Re: Life Cycle Of A Helium Balloon
Look at them: resilient and lighter than air a tail of ribbons fashioned into helices Good beginning. They push at the ceiling optimistically bobbing; attempting to escape into space. However[color=#F
Oct 27, 2011 -
Re: I, Too
may i borrow this......for realz...... really good poem.Quality work and authentic swag to it. I know swag is not appropriate for describing a poem but it just happened. Great work, ...
Oct 26, 2011 -
Re: If A Thought Is Worth A Penny...
Wow, where do i begin? This poem is amazingly well written and contains an enormous amount of talent. You, are the next big thing in poetry. I might even be ...
Oct 26, 2011 -
Re: Gamophobe
The fish es jump over the bridge, soaring upstream to reach the high waters. They catch plump flies, green, that hover just below silver boughs which in the sunlight do ...
Oct 24, 2011 -
Re: Cheesecake Icon
Its not only the most unique icon made in gimp, but its cheesecake ..too.....shaking my head.
Oct 23, 2011 -
Re: Life
I agree wholeheartedly with this poem. Punctuated as it might be, it was accurate and simply effortless. Sometimes life is always hard, can't seem to ever play the right card. ...
Oct 23, 2011 -
Re: Wishes and Fishes
First let me say it is the shortest poem I have ever reviewed. Not only that, but i like the flawless effort you put into writing this mini poem. It ...
Oct 22, 2011 -
Re: Where did it all go wrong?
I never said that I'd be there for you, that I'd care for you. I never meant that I would stay with you, I never wanted to. We never had ...
Oct 22, 2011 -
Re: Where did it all go wrong?
I never said that I'd be there for you, that I'd care for you. I never meant that I would stay with you, I never wanted to. Great opening
Oct 22, 2011 -
Re: The Devil's Balconies
Come, me merry Gents and Misses, and hear me morbid tale o'twist'us, Ye fear the sound revenge insist'us, as a weary yeep o' mist encrypt'us. not sure what to make ...
Oct 22, 2011 -
Re: Into the Darkness
WOW. Where hace you been all this time.? First, my hat is off to you for pulling this off. Second, yo deserve respect for putting gemstone colors in the story. ...
Oct 22, 2011 -
Re: Cruelty thy name is......
Chronological routine......i like it. Original to you and definitely one of a kind. A fitting reminder of how cruel, the morning actually can be.....sometimes........always. The level of detail used i
Oct 22, 2011
