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  • General Fiction Short Stories Re: Always Stick Together Chapter 1

    "Jakey, time for school. I smile as he pries his tired eyes open. "Sam, I don't wanna go!" He pouts, turning into his pillow. "Neither do I, Jakey . But ...

    Oct 31, 2011
  • Other Poetry Re: Broken Roots

    You’re the devil’s soldier Turned from God . no comments necessary. love t,

    Oct 30, 2011
  • Other Poetry Re: ......noname...

    love the poem so much. no changes needed. Perfection in writing poetry, bravo and keep writing. possible title could be Lost Without You

    Oct 30, 2011
  • Action/Adventure Novels Re: Empaths - Chapter 2

    Chapter 2: Maisie Smith It was sunny in Florida. This meant two things for Maisie Smith. One, she really needed some after sun on her nose and face, Two, She ...

    Oct 30, 2011
  • Poetry Discussion Re: The Unknown

    The Unknown As we know , There are known knowns. There are things we know we know. We also know There are known unknowns. That is to say We know ...

    Oct 30, 2011
  • Other Poetry Re: La Flor de Oro

    Te amo el poema, es muy verdad.

    Oct 30, 2011
  • Other Poetry Re: 401k

    no voyage— the lanterns all hung off until they are a pink-toured pails of glass and tin snow filtered fish budding up against the hull this south salt sloop that ...

    Oct 29, 2011
  • Lyrics Re: Beginning to End

    I miss you I miss you I miss you I miss you When we started off It was just me watching from the corner You didn't take one chance of ...

    Oct 29, 2011
  • Other Re: Days of Ache

    I miss you so much that I think I am losing whatever sanity I had left. Of course it changes day to day- sometimes I am given the strength to ...

    Oct 29, 2011
  • Other Poetry Re: The Boy Named Suffering

    I love the format of the poem, but even more the wording paints a clear picture of a life. One similar to mine. Love the fact that you also were ...

    Oct 29, 2011
  • Lyric Poetry Re: The Lights

    as twilight begins to fade, the lights mark their favourite spots in the sky. one by one, they take a seat, and watch the show Earth puts on below. the ...

    Oct 29, 2011
  • Lyric Poetry Re: Hear No Silence

    When you see the sign, you'd want to cross the road. No one soon knows why urban decay takes hold There is never silence; the cars and the machines, the ...

    Oct 29, 2011
  • General Fiction Short Stories Re: Creation Story

    In a land before the creation of stars and planets, there once lived a powerful being. His name was Erthas. Erthas, in the eyes of all the smaller beings that ...

    Oct 28, 2011
  • Lyric Poetry Re: Perfect Days

    Folded in my arms you are a butterfly in reverse, Giving up your wings, will deliver my curse. Your letting to of me. i think you meant "GO" Your letting ...

    Oct 28, 2011
  • Other Poetry Re: The End Of The Night

    I like it, i love it, i want some more of it! I just wanted a kiss nothing but your kiss, now I can't believe how it came to this; ...

    Oct 28, 2011


You are all the colours in one, at full brightness.
— Jennifer Niven, 'All the Bright Places'