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Re: Always Stick Together Chapter 1
"Jakey, time for school. I smile as he pries his tired eyes open. "Sam, I don't wanna go!" He pouts, turning into his pillow. "Neither do I, Jakey . But ...
Oct 31, 2011 -
Re: Broken Roots
You’re the devil’s soldier Turned from God . no comments necessary. love t,
Oct 30, 2011 -
Re: ......noname...
love the poem so much. no changes needed. Perfection in writing poetry, bravo and keep writing. possible title could be Lost Without You
Oct 30, 2011 -
Re: Empaths - Chapter 2
Chapter 2: Maisie Smith It was sunny in Florida. This meant two things for Maisie Smith. One, she really needed some after sun on her nose and face, Two, She ...
Oct 30, 2011 -
Re: The Unknown
The Unknown As we know , There are known knowns. There are things we know we know. We also know There are known unknowns. That is to say We know ...
Oct 30, 2011 -
Re: La Flor de Oro
Te amo el poema, es muy verdad.
Oct 30, 2011 -
Re: 401k
no voyage— the lanterns all hung off until they are a pink-toured pails of glass and tin snow filtered fish budding up against the hull this south salt sloop that ...
Oct 29, 2011 -
Re: Beginning to End
I miss you I miss you I miss you I miss you When we started off It was just me watching from the corner You didn't take one chance of ...
Oct 29, 2011 -
Re: Days of Ache
I miss you so much that I think I am losing whatever sanity I had left. Of course it changes day to day- sometimes I am given the strength to ...
Oct 29, 2011 -
Re: The Boy Named Suffering
I love the format of the poem, but even more the wording paints a clear picture of a life. One similar to mine. Love the fact that you also were ...
Oct 29, 2011 -
Re: The Lights
as twilight begins to fade, the lights mark their favourite spots in the sky. one by one, they take a seat, and watch the show Earth puts on below. the ...
Oct 29, 2011 -
Re: Hear No Silence
When you see the sign, you'd want to cross the road. No one soon knows why urban decay takes hold There is never silence; the cars and the machines, the ...
Oct 29, 2011 -
Re: Creation Story
In a land before the creation of stars and planets, there once lived a powerful being. His name was Erthas. Erthas, in the eyes of all the smaller beings that ...
Oct 28, 2011 -
Re: Perfect Days
Folded in my arms you are a butterfly in reverse, Giving up your wings, will deliver my curse. Your letting to of me. i think you meant "GO" Your letting ...
Oct 28, 2011 -
Re: The End Of The Night
I like it, i love it, i want some more of it! I just wanted a kiss nothing but your kiss, now I can't believe how it came to this; ...
Oct 28, 2011
