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Re: Hearts Most Desire
Great poem. I love the face that you did not make it rhyme, i like this type of poetry as well. Water floods my soul Pools lie in my sight ...
Nov 1, 2011 -
Re: My darling, my best friend, my everything
In my life I have driven past dozens, possibly even hundreds of car crash sites. The flowers and cards laid out on the road, the broken pieces of the car ...
Oct 31, 2011 -
Re: Short Poems #2
optional spelling misspelling spelling error Everything's So Tender Now I found your name on my hand Written down with a pen The ink is like a tattoo of shame Hiding ...
Oct 31, 2011 -
Re: Musing
What is a muse? To be absorbed in thought or to say to oneself in a thoughtful manner. O.k. I can review now. Muse #1 My Muse is a chameleon: ...
Oct 31, 2011 -
Re: Short Poems #2
Don't preach to me Don't knock on my door When I come back I don't want to see your face "Amen........................." best expression of a typical person's reaction today. Well ...
Oct 31, 2011 -
Re: They are blind!!!
Sadness is the pain. great line... the pain of what ...... Everything else is numb Like no blood rushing to the skin. Blue water in her eyes, understatement Tears... Could ...
Oct 31, 2011 -
Re: Love
It is not a poem, it is a limerick originally.
Oct 31, 2011 -
Re: All Hallows Eve
I love the fact that you took time to write a poem about today. So festive. Excellent way to be smashing. Just a simple poem and factual. Great use of ...
Oct 31, 2011 -
Re: Love
Once there lived MARTH, a great prince.The thought of a date made him wince! But then he met IKE, Whom he found out he liked, his emotions decided to fight ...
Oct 31, 2011 -
Re: Love
Once there lived MARTH , a great prince. The thought of a date made him wince! But then he met IKE , Whom he found out he liked, his emotions ...
Oct 31, 2011 -
Re: Goodbye to Goodbyes
General opinion was a great poem with some minor issues. First: Love the title and the opening line. Goodbye to Goodbyes I don't want them anymore. Second: Slight difficulty in ...
Oct 31, 2011 -
Re: Love
Once there was Marth, a prince. The thought of a date made him wince! But then he met Ike Whom he found out he liked And hasn't seen women since.
Oct 31, 2011 -
Re: the Unknown
The Unknown As we know , There are known knowns. There are things we know we know. We also know There are known unknowns. That is to say We know ...
Oct 31, 2011 -
Re: The YWS Critique Sandwich
that's what he said...........nomnomnom...wolf babies :P
Oct 31, 2011 -
Re: You know you wanna know me.
nice to meet you.
Oct 31, 2011