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Re: Hidden- Chapter Nine
I know what to say, except not how to say it. I love this story. The end. It is legit.
Oct 16, 2011 -
Re: I miss the Rain
Dost thou knowst know What you mean to me? O , keeper of my sanity You showed me the beauty of sadness You accepted my ragged heart You were patient ...
Oct 16, 2011 -
Re: I miss the Rain
Smashing poem. Keep it up. I lived it so much, i became a huge fan of this. I miss the rain, is great, well written and inspired obviously, otherwise it ...
Oct 16, 2011 -
Re: Walking Home
Wow. Lived it. Loved it. Liked it.
Oct 16, 2011 -
Re: Walking Home
have you ever thought this could possibly the start for a novel for NanoWrimo, and the fact it possesses the ability and the structure needed for the makings of a ...
Oct 16, 2011 -
Re: Your Uncle Does What?!-Continued.
* Report this post I love the storyline. The author is clearly a born writer. Why not continue the story.
Oct 16, 2011 -
Re: WriterFeed Pad For New Members
thanks for the information on that because when I did sign up, it was already a month too late. Good looking out. Thanks bro
Oct 16, 2011 -
Re: The story of Pegasus
This is probably one of the dumbest, most non-entertaining stories I have written to date. Yet, the fact that I have commented three times on my own work already, means ...
Oct 16, 2011 -
Re: Photgraphy: Roses, pigeons and Peacocks
quite an interesting medley of photos
Oct 15, 2011 -
Re: Angel Bound- the Chronicals of Angel Light
WOW! Totally a wonderful example of talent and skill combined into a proliferation of words that cohesively paint a portrait of the story and the writer. WELL DONE. The next ...
Oct 15, 2011 -
Re: Untitled
So I woke up today And had the worst feeling My nails are filthy My eyes are splitting . bad transition Since tonight will be the night And the heart ...
Oct 15, 2011 -
Re: Untitled
Great poem. Love the imagery painted as well as the message given. It could not be more real. Keep it up.
Oct 15, 2011 -
Re: To Alex
I guess this is a one verse poem, so there is not much to talk about here. Although somewhat catchy, a suggested revision would include more lines, less contractions and ...
Oct 15, 2011 -
Re: In the House with Chicken Feet (7)
When Hin first woke up, he was sure he was dreaming. It would make sense after all. He was curled tightly into a ball, warm and secure. It had all ...
Oct 14, 2011 -
Re: In the House with Chicken Feet (7)
When Hin first woke up, he was sure he was dreaming. It would make sense after all. He was curled tightly into a ball, warm and secure. It had all ...
Oct 14, 2011
