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  • lacrymosa

    Jul 2, 2012


  • afterlife

    Jul 2, 2012


  • Great poem. Ok so I absolutely love the rhyme and flow that this possesses. You write in such grace and with such eloquence, nor review is necessary because it is ...

    Nov 5, 2011


  • Title of the poem is unique and i like that. Forever and a Day and a Half Each day will pass, Like an eternity of Not seeing your face Not ...

    Nov 1, 2011

  • Dramatic Poetry
    Re: Shu

    You said you wanted to say something about the beginning of your poem and quite sincerely I am rather amused and amazed at the first stanza. I saw an accurate ...

    Nov 1, 2011

  • General Fiction Short Stories
    Re: The Good Seed: Part 5

    A Spermatozoon I am one of the billions he created. My brothers say, “Surely, he made each of us for a purpose. He loves us. We are his children.” I'm ...

    Oct 31, 2011

  • Dramatic Poetry
    Re: Intimacies

    At night you bite me, I flush, and you curl like a leaf in my palm; we lay down to rise without a word spoken. great lines Nice job.

    Oct 31, 2011

  • Other Poetry
    Re: Purple Walls

    beautiful poem in all honesty.... love the title.....Purple Walls I feel so out of place, here among my possessions. These purple walls are so familiar, yet so foreign to me ...

    Oct 31, 2011

  • Lyric Poetry
    Re: Love is Lost ...

    Your love was worth the sun and the moon , nice intro I hoped that you would kiss me soon , But when I looked into your eyes, peering into ...

    Oct 31, 2011

  • Lyric Poetry
    Re: Burning Thoughts

    I absolutely adore the last stanza, and the use of GOD in the lines. It was unique and simple and using God has been lost in the modern writings of ...

    Oct 31, 2011

  • Lyric Poetry
    Re: Burning Thoughts

    I love the title. It makes me imagine the painful sting of each and every thought i experience. Great choice. Love the poem and opening stanzas as well as the ...

    Oct 31, 2011

  • General Fiction Novels
    Re: Illusion of Evolution

    I love how you end the chapter with a question? Evolution brings change but not all changes are good…. Are they? Other things i would like to comment on were ...

    Oct 31, 2011

  • Art & Photography
    Re: Mister Punkin Head

    The pumpkin's expression is priceless it should have more of an sneer/smirk, maybe fire in those 'eyes'. More razed teeth or something.

    Oct 31, 2011

  • Fantasy Novels
    Re: Chapter 8: Sibera

    I like this story. I have not read the other two chapters but do plan to. Before I go on, the viewpoint is amazing and was spot on. I did ...

    Oct 31, 2011

  • Historical Fiction Short Stories
    Re: The Mariner's Revenge

    The Mariner's Revenge “Mamma?” My voice trembled as I pressed my face to the wooden banister, peering between the slats at her. “I’m off then!” Charles piped, all chipper as ...

    Oct 31, 2011


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— Christopher Darlington Morley