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Re: She'll Wait at the Window
I've never met you before so, Ello! She hears the rain falling on the window, trickling down the frosted pane, OOH! I like how you said frosted pane. and she ...
Oct 12, 2011 -
Re: Secrets
A secret kept A secret lost Another entrance to the room cut off. But I say I get in there some day Get back all my secrets I said I'd ...
Sep 16, 2011 -
Re: Rainbow (Chapter 3)
Okay Her name is Rainbow right? Then Why would others no her by Scarlet thats confusing ~Dmari
Sep 13, 2011 -
Re: Fallen Graces Chapter One
Oh my god this is so cool. I have only read one book like this the main character being Gabriel. This was a really good pice of work and I ...
Sep 12, 2011 -
Re: Fallen Graces Chapter One
Oh my god this is so cool. I have only read one book like this the main character being Gabriel. This was a really good pice of work and I ...
Sep 12, 2011 -
Re: Insecurity
I always thought you'd be My Prince Charming. Now I see you took advantage of my insecurity You never really liked me. I always thought this would be my Cinderella ...
Sep 9, 2011 -
Re: Always stick together Chapter 4
Oh my god! I really Love your novel when are you going to write more? This was really Intense.
Sep 9, 2011 -
Re: Johnny...So Very Lonely
I really liked this. For some odd reason I thought of The Child Called It. With out the abuse. Well thats all I had to say. Keep writing ~dasiamari
Jul 21, 2011 -
Re: Dark Turning chapter Two - The right one
I wrote a bit more to this sooo...
Jun 29, 2011 -
Re: Storm
I like this. You already got a very good review so nothing to say about that. What I want to say is ( maybe its just me) your comment above ...
Jun 29, 2011 -
Re: The Wisdom of the Wisdom Tooth
I liked this alot. Keep it up.
Jun 28, 2011 -
Re: Trees
Thanks!
Jun 25, 2011 -
Re: Trees
I walked up to the tree. Here mom had hung a ribbon for every death as far back as she knew. I touched the soft violet ribbon that mom hung ...
Jun 25, 2011 -
Re: Depression (Vignette)
I curled up tighter on my blue quilt. I could hear their laughing voices from the other room. No one asked me to join. Or maybe they did. "Who cares?" ...
Jun 24, 2011 -
Re: Here and There
I like this alot. I look foward to reading more!!
Jun 24, 2011
