dasiamari

Okay dasiamari here to review your...sentence. Okay this is good but a little cliche. You also spelled tomorrow wrong.(I always do!) And it says your a new user so welcome! ...

Name: Henry Nightfield Age: 10 but he acts a lot older Weapon: none now (later a whip I think) Appearance: Black hair, green eyes, pale skin ,skinny Personaltity :Stubborn and ...

Lost Souls A woman crept through the streets pausing at the door step of the hospital all you could see was her shadows she looked like a shadow her self ...

Wow when I go back and look at my old poems compared to my new its like "Wow, you still suck!" :P

Yeah I wrote this all. Kind of a spur of a moment thing. Every thing on yws people write/draw/ or take pictures of they do it them selves (sometimes with ...

I liked this and the only thing I can comment on it this. Mom, I want you to know this was not your fault… This story on a whole doesn't ...

You guys please don't go to hard on the comments. This is the first time I've ever written about this and I'm not sure I'm ready to be torn apart ...

Taking the last few swigs of his drink, he walked up to the bar and sat down on one of the black stools. He knew what he had to do ...

Ahg! Cliff Hanger! I love it ! Corrections in blue, Compliments in red , Questions in pink By the way welcome to YWS! In a small town on the outskirts ...

I really like this poem. It seems like a song to me and I sang it also. You've left me broken But you don't care All you here is my ...

thanks

Okay BEFORE read this. I know that its a diary entry. So you don't need that in the reviews. Also this is only PART ONE! And the random capitalization is ...

Wow! you rhymed!! I love it! I haven't seen any poems rhyme on here lately. Day after day, Year after year I spend all my time, Sitting right here. Waiting ...

I liked these a lot the cool 20's dude made me think of my little brother minus the drink and ciggeate (lol) And I like how the last one is ...

Okay I've never met you so HAI!! My smile is not real anymore. I only smile when I am forced too, This has changed because you've broken my smile. This ...