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Re: FROZEN VENGEANCE (Prologue, Revised) +13
Thanks for the reviews you guys! *High Five* :D
Jan 8, 2012 -
Re: Not coming back
Your yelling and impatiently pushing your hair out your face. And I'm crying because I don't know the rules to this game. And I'm just trying to tell you that ...
Jan 4, 2012 -
Re: You'll be around
I can't sleep so I'm writing this song again. Crumpled papers filling up the waste bin. Trying to think of a way To say Chorus That I love you. That ...
Jan 4, 2012 -
Re: This path (Rough)
I've been trying to clear the fog off they end of this road. Its dim and thick and I don't know where to go next now. Sometimes It get so ...
Jan 4, 2012 -
Re: Broke My heart with a picture
Kind of venting song lyrics that need work I stare in disbelief This is what you hid from me? You could have just told me. But you left me to ...
Jan 4, 2012 -
Re: would someone give me some feedback on what i have written?
The moon was shining as bright as its sister, the sun, had just a few hours before. Calisan moved up a little bit closer to the antiquated oak tree. He ...
Jan 2, 2012 -
Re: Snow Angel
Hai!! I love these! I like the darkened one the most!
Jan 1, 2012 -
Re: Drowning in The Rain (Sherlys song)
Started four years ago. When you asked if we could go Out. three years past We get married we were happy. Or so it seemed. Now you're gone and being ...
Jan 1, 2012 -
Re: nothing
Here to reply as requested!! I like far as I can tell the other reviewer covered everything! One thing though. I felt this would have flowed better with punctuation. Just ...
Dec 31, 2011 -
Re: That song in my head...
I'm alone On my own and that's all I know I'll be strong I'll be wrong Oh but life goes on -Taylor Swift A place in this world
Dec 29, 2011 -
Re: His Princess
He took it rough when her momma died. But she was there like a shining light. He took her shopping Even though he didn't understand When she talked about the ...
Dec 29, 2011 -
Re: Phone calls
Thanks! I couldn't find the button!! :D
Dec 28, 2011 -
Re: Phone calls
*wrong
Dec 27, 2011 -
Re: Phone calls
Thanks I did this in one story but a person said I shouldn't write a conversation like this guess they were wong
Dec 27, 2011 -
Re: YWS Apollo FAQ
Thanks! Are we going to get our WFP back?
Dec 25, 2011
