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that was okay not bad maybe a little editing

This is very good I can't really correct you on any thing Because i am not the best one for that

why write a poem about not liking writing poems there is no point

this was really good there were a few mistakes read it out loud and I am sure you will find them

I need more people I don't really know how this works but I really need some one to be named Evangelina and other people can pick there own names

Jentte ran across the open field,without a care in the world.She was running after a large butterfly.Then she woke up with a jolt, she was back in her bed with ...

that was cool Can not think of any other names (sorry) please pm or yahoo messenger me If you think of one or write anything else. *

this is the poem this is what it is to say my friend wrote this

this is really cool

Gone, but not forgotten Forgotten, but not gone The baby in the cradle sleeps on and on The innocent lives among us The devil does his deeds Even the strongest ...

yet she did not feell the need to run away. Only one l in feel other than that and one other mistake I loved it

I like it But it made me think Of twilight new moon the scars on her face

Chapter one I woke up an hour earlier than normal. I had the strangest feeling I was being watched. I had only been in this god forsaken town for a ...

Twilight

I loved this the first part made my think of alice from twilight before she was a vampire