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This good write more please (Unless it is done already)

Pazey was that supposed to be an insult because it was kind of rude and said nothing about the poem

wow! this is really good i wish there was more there is a story playing out in my head because of where you left it Really loved it Take away ...

This story was really good. Only one thing should it be delude instead of delusion " you delusion your self"

I paint my nails black where no one can see Afraid to be teased or stand out Alone in my room I Dye my hair blue I stand out where ...

"Dry spell, dry spell, go away! Don’t come back, another day! " This made me think of that rain rain go away song "But oh so sad am I. No ...

WELCOME! Hi this was really good hope to hear a lot more from you . WELCOME!

This is really good my first thing was horrible xD

This was really good.Still like that it is all Questions "Her hair is long and blond her body slim and meek." This was a good way to describe her making ...

Wow this is scary! But I felt as if I could feel what the person felt as if I was the person with a "Finger to a trigger" . This ...

This was really good and it sounded mysterous

This was good I liked how it was just questions and it doesn't look like you sat for three hours to think of the next line it sound like it ...

just random things any weirdo would shout out on the bus :) Two cats fighting over Elvis!! Small dogs pee on leprachans !!! Wack a seagull !! Please those birds ...

I am dancing on your grave twirling a ribbon over cold corpse Tears fall from others eyes I smile and laugh Why cry when you are happy? You left the ...

This was really sad can't find any thing wrong =}