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Re: Have You Lost Me
I really like this . You said grammar doesn't matter but punctuation does right? Sorry if it doesn't. Take your dullest words Comma And drive them through my chest Period ...
Jun 7, 2011 -
Re: Hearts Like Islands
Okay I like this. BUT why is she on the island? Why Is she a librainan? Kind of confusing there. Other than that I really liked this .
Jun 7, 2011 -
Re: Young Writers Society Slow song!
OHHHHH! Thank you Young Writers Society, For always being there for me. A place to post and talk to friends we never met. Isn't neat That Nate could make such ...
Jun 7, 2011 -
Re: Continuation of Breaking Dawn (twilight saga)
Red Crescent: The twilight saga continued... Introduction Through unpathed waters and undreamed shores love shall venture, but when you are forced to roam the earth forever more; is just love ...
Jun 5, 2011 -
Re: Lava's Volcano [Active]
Chapter one?
Jun 4, 2011 -
Re: Dark Turning chapter Two - The right one
What the heck was that?!" I yelled as we drove away. "Okay, I have alot of explaining to do." My mom said more to herself than to us. "Yeah start ...
May 26, 2011 -
Re: Dark Turning Chapter One : Children
Yep next chapter!
May 25, 2011 -
Re: DELETED
Okay This used to be Rain fall now its Dark turner .
May 25, 2011 -
Re: Dark Turning Chapter One : Children
Lightning cracked through the sky. "Dad`s not happy!" I yelled to my sister, as she stabbed a hell hound, her spear crackling with electricity. She looked up at the flashing ...
May 25, 2011 -
Re: Grrr. Be afraid.
Welcome !!
May 25, 2011 -
Re: Uh.
Hello! Welcome to YWS. Nice to have you aboard all the weirdness you will find here! :D I know that you like it ,but just to make sure you do ...
May 25, 2011 -
Re: Face the wind
Hope that`s better
May 23, 2011 -
Re: Always Stick Together Chapter 2
Yea! You wrote more ! I really love this you have a few errors like hear needs to be here. But besides that I love it !
May 22, 2011 -
Re: New Writer With Big Goals!
Nice to meet you! I would love to read your works welcome to YWS. I`m sure you`ll like it here!
May 22, 2011 -
Re: Island life
I climbed higher into the tree . It had been two years ago when my boat had washed up here on this island .Now as I look in the distance ...
May 22, 2011
