darktom666

Comments would be really appreciated :(

Yea I know, I've never been good at grammar and ponctuation (even in french which is my primary language XD) :(

Finished... here is the edited version.. Hope you like it more than the first one :) Chapter 1: The Decisive Battle "Yes my Lord, said Ryu kneeling down, we will ...

I'm not sure what you mean by "a star on a sun"? Also, I don't think what you're describing is really all that possible. Bits of space junk crash into ...

BuMp :( Comments please

:O Ok yea I see lol.. sorry for posting it in wrong section.. and comments are welcomed :)

:( no fans of Fantastic Adventures here? :(

I'd like some comments please :0 and thank you