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Re: dark heart, demon slayer: a demon's tears
'the demons come at night. hope they dont freeze you in fright!' i played the song over and over in my head. i remember his smiling face in the shop, ...
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Re: Guy Of My Dreams
amazing story, short, but sweet and to the point, and that point is love!!! i love how you made the situation where her friend liked him too!!!! that's a good ...
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Re: The violinist
loved it!! oh, and congrats on you being a guy who wrote a romance story!!! i loved it how you described him feeling like he was in heaven because of ...
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Re: On the Edge
omfg!! that was the most heartwarming story ever, and to be saved by angels!!! amazing!! this literally made me cry!! to lose someone, and find them again, even if it ...
Jul 20, 2010 -
Re: Twilight *Contains excessive nagging and puke worthyness*
ton of reviews!!! please review me since i reviewed you. Ive read all the twilight books, so to read this blew my mind!! i loved it, it made me laugh ...
Jul 20, 2010 -
Re: Battle of Brothers
i agree that you should be more descreptive when writing, but otherwise, the story was very unique. i liked it, becuase ive never read something like this. its a new ...
Jul 20, 2010 -
Re: Removed
i liked this story. i don't really know why though.... i guess because i thought the end was exciting. i never read that in twilight!! and i loved how you ...
Jul 20, 2010 -
Re: school wars beginning
thanks for the help meggwriting!! and the review!!! i appreciate it! I'll fix it!:)
Jul 20, 2010 -
Re: Lies Like Roses and Thorns
okay, first off, you have, a lot of reviews. i only have one. please review mine. I'm new. even if you were chosen the winner randomly, I'm pretty sure you ...
Jul 20, 2010 -
Re: Savage Beasts Ch1
i loved how i could put myself in the story. but i feel really sad about the baby dying part. the graphic description of what he looked like after he ...
Jul 19, 2010 -
Re: Possessing Maya - OLD
hey borntobeawriter! i love your story! its really descriptive and interesting for a short story. you should make novels! I'm new and young, but I've written my own stories. they're ...
Jul 19, 2010 -
Re: school wars beginning
school wars The day was dark, and my eyes grew huge. This was it. The beginning. We all sat in the gym, tenth through thirteenth years. No one was here ...
Jul 19, 2010
