darkfictionboys

hey, d.f.b. here. i totally and completely understand where your coming from with the whole random thoughts thing. i have those all the time. and i can relate on how ...

hey, d.f.b. here. i liked this story. it was very nice. i liked how you made Taryn think that she still loved him. the last part where he threw her ...

gotta few questions here. who was the brat? and what was the package? how big was it? where was she besides a dark alleyway? besides these, i thought it was ...

d.f.b. here. this story made me cry. really, and i hardly ever cry. but this really got to me. i could imagine her feeling, the dream she had. this story ...

hey, d.f.b. here! i loved this piece. it was short, but you made it really good to make up for that. i could imagine the characters room, his house, his ...

hey, d.f.b. here. i liked this story, it was composed well, and i loved the concept. i just wished that you had described the imagery more. like what might grace ...

hello, d.f.b. here. okay, first off, i read one of the earlier versions, and i must say that you sure did move a lot of things around. i like this ...

My hands thightened thier grip, as if on thier own. I looked down, my eyes wild and my heart racing from the meth. her eyes rolled back. those ice blue ...

hey kakagirl, its d.f.c., here to review! i did notice some little grammar mistakes, but its still a good story. you should try to portray how Serena felt deep inside, ...

hey ilovemyboys, i thought this story was absolutely wonderful in every way. well, except for the repetitive 'the way', i loved, loved, loved it!! i could seriously put my self ...

loved it! i wish my brother had told me to do that and i had actually found one!! by the way, love your name, ladypurple. i love the color purple. ...

my life is dark. its twisted. its wrong. born in a world in time where i don't belong. its all falling apart. i feel dead, but i still move. when ...

i liked it. i have dark times too, well actually, im always like that..... it expressed how you felt very well. now, i dont know if your supposed to adress ...

loved it!!! i like the whole mixing in different religions, such as god and godesses. i like how he's a dark angel, with dark mysterious wings. i just wish you ...

holy shit!! i loved this story!!! i love reading stuff about things like this!!! it makes me wonder about the twist at the end. its sad to think that he ...