darkfictionboys

love it. nice m. night twist in the end. keep it up.:)

you're an amazing writer. short but to the point, in a way. beautiful way with words, considered poetry? it made me imagine everything, very good. keep writing, don't stop.loved it. ...

Life is a miracle. But its also shit. You can try hard as hell to be and do your best, but it doesnt mean shit. This is just humanities fake ...

I liked this. It was depressingly beautiful. Very well conveyed and written. Im not good with grammar,so sorry. The person commenting before me was right though. Bye!

The funeral. I sighed in the cold december air. It was one of those days, where the chill made everything seem clearer. Painfully clear. I was the only one at ...

and another thing, this is in no way like my life. at all.

thanks for your reviews, and I'm sorry, but this piece is only in this category because i put it in the wrong one. i was going to put this into ...

hey, d.f.b. here. well, where do i begin??? i loved this shit awesome story!!! i mean i thought it was totally true. that kind of crap happens a lot in ...

hey, d.f.b. here. i liked this story. it showed how a simple thing as a very very fine car can make people compete. i like the description of the car. ...

hey, d.f.b. here. first off, love linkin park, and love your prof. pic. i like this piece. its imaginative, and the way you described the dream to reality part was ...

hey, d.f.b. here. welcome noob!!! hope you enjoy your stay at the yws! i loved how you wrote this. the comparisons and words you used to articulate your thoughts were ...

hey, d.f.b. here. this story made me laugh. was it really a true story? what place were you living in? well, anyway, i liked it, the way on how you ...

hey, d.f.b. here. loved this!! i think your view as a child was good. it was really sad when her mama died though. but the work here was good. very ...

hey, d.f.b. here. i love this story. i like the unique way that you had the MC talk, as if she was explaining what he did back to him. i ...

hey,d.f.b. here. i liked this story. it was good. like d.d. said, you don't give us to much, but its a prologue, so yeah. the whole abuse and running away ...