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Re: A Vampires Kiss
I really liked this story, being a vampire fan myself, and the detail you put into it. However, more detail should be put into the scene where she is changing ...
Jan 6, 2012 -
Re: Trapped
Trapped Morgan Green “Isn’t it sad Jessamine?” Brayden, my best friend, said suddenly. I rolled onto my side and propped up on my elbow, facing him and looking out at ...
Jan 6, 2012 -
Re: Demon Dancer
At first it was a simple bow, A step and then a twirl. They looked on in awe and wondered how Evil had entrapped this innocent girl. She was struck ...
May 31, 2011 -
Re: Blinded
A field of flowers, brightly- colored, swaying In the breeze, petals reaching toward the sun. All together, blending in and oblivious, seemingly saying: "With life so perfect and care- free, ...
Mar 17, 2011 -
Re: Sanity vs. Love
Hello! Morgan3509 here :)! I loved this poem. It tells a story and reminds me of things that have happened in my life. It is always good to write about ...
Mar 17, 2011 -
Re: Bloodsuckers
Hello! Morgan3509 here! First of all, I love the poem VERY much. I have, for a long time, been very into vampires, and i believe that this is a very ...
Mar 17, 2011 -
Re: Trapped
Fear is crippling and merciless; It can devour you in seconds flat. The judgmental will call you a coward, The childish, a scaredy- cat. As if they haven't experienced fear, ...
Mar 17, 2011 -
Re: The Inch - The Full Story - The Final Chapter
Whisperer, I can't beieve what a completely amazing story this was! It was so great...I'm speechless! The characters were well-developed and whimsical, the plot flowed gracefully, and I absolutely lov
Nov 25, 2010 -
Re: Cruel Irony (a metaphorical poem about people I know)
I have seen a stone statue cry tears of anguish. I have heard a pit of beautiful dark tell of their fear and pain. I have watched light slowly fade ...
Nov 25, 2010 -
Re: Dark Flame
Hey Writer97! To start off, I love your work!( & i'm not just saying that because you're my best friend lol) Also, I like this poem very much. I know ...
Nov 25, 2010 -
Re: Our Time
hello! first of all, i just wanted to say that you are a very creative & i enjoy your writing. Otherwise, i have also been known to write when i ...
Nov 2, 2010 -
Re: Awake
Hello! I really enjoy your writing. It is very clear what it is about, and lyrical but narrative at the same time. I love this poem, and your others also. ...
Aug 11, 2010 -
Re: A peom of lines
Wow....that was great. You are an amazing writer! :-)
Aug 11, 2010 -
Re: Midnight
Sixteen year old Dahlia Auruse seemed to always be showered by a never-ending rain of new. New house, new school, new teachers, new friends, new neighborhood, and now, new powers. ...
Aug 11, 2010
