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Yes, Twilight is one of those books that is one in a million, not to mension makes you go all warm and fuzzy inside :D. I loved Damon too, but ...

True, when I read it, I was in a 'must read vampire novel NOW' mood so I got through it pretty quickly, but i can see why you wouldn't be ...

:D, me like. Okay, so Borat-speak aside, I thought it was really good! One little thing that looked like it could be improved is that the whole, 'I'm suddenly going ...

*giggles at recent memories of stupidity when in the area of cute guys* I thought it was really cute and agree with the comments from Gryphon and Sam. So, since ...

I read both parts of your story and I think they're really good, especially since a guy is writing them. Of course, this is coming from the person who could ...

It's the last part, yay! ____________~~~~~~~~~_____________ Seven years had changed nothing. The same five-year-old girl that had fallen asleep in her grandmother’s arms was faced with the same situ

I kind of feel like I should be sharpenning some knives and cackling after reading your story. You definitely hooked me right at the beginning. Prokaryote said everything that I ...

No, I have more to torture your editing skills with *insert dramatic music and maniacal laughter here*

Hahahaha. *Scurries to look for aforementioned edit button*

I thought this was pretty cool, especially the way you worded the whole thing, it fitted the story I thought. Anyway, here's is just some nit-picky stuff. I hide, across ...

So here's Part 2, hope you like it and don't hurt it too much :P. Just kidding, have at it if you want, it makes it better :D. EDIT: I ...

Alright so I fixed this one up with the tweaks that I got so hopefully it satisfies. Anyway, I'm going to post Part 2 as well and that's where most ...

Having retrieved the remains of my story from the battlefield, I've revamped it using the critiques that I got. Hopefully you like it because I think it is quite better ...

A little girl woke up in a bed not her own. It was firm yet soft, but it still didn't feel like her bed, the one with pink frills all ...

Stefan's the good one, basically an Edward and then Damon is the "bad" one, but both are equally dreamy *sighs* :P