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  • Action/Adventure Novels Re: chapter 1: Wrong place, wrong time

    Intense! Are you Kyle? That English teacher sounds strict. I wonder why Mr.Callahan only got the note? I hope you explain how the killer (that just appeared out of nowhere) ...

    Oct 28, 2008
  • Action/Adventure Short Stories Re: Happy Halloween...

    “Love is a powerful and deadly substance. When wealth is added to the equation, love may cease.” -Anonymous At first, there was slashing. Then there was fear and blood of ...

    Oct 28, 2008
  • Other Poetry Re: Nothing Rhymes With Purple

    That was cute! it had a nice flow and consistent beat. I liked how there was a twist and fuse of Dr. Seuss in the Purple poem. It's seems to ...

    Oct 22, 2008
  • Action/Adventure Short Stories Re: An end

    I really enjoyed reading this: the story line was carefully thought out, it was well written with suspense, and I could really feel the tension Peony had. I really liked ...

    Oct 12, 2008
  • Action/Adventure Short Stories Re: New "Corky" Story

    Wits of Rich and the Poor Everyday, unusual things happen that can easily be avoided. If you see a turtle dancing and talking, you can merely just go into denial ...

    Oct 11, 2008
  • Homework Help Re: URGENT! Career project for #th GRade!

    Thank you so much for both of you! THank you for answering at the very least! oh, and i donated 20 to "Dreamer", but now i'm not gonna fail! yeah! ...

    May 2, 2008
  • Homework Help Re: URGENT! Career project for #th GRade!

    Hi, I'm in the 6th grade and i need someone to interview for a career choice in writing. I am verryyy desperate now since it is due Thursday so I ...

    Apr 30, 2008
  • Research Re: Help on Career project

    Hi, I'm in the 6th grade and i need someone to interview for a career choice in writing. I just need to ask a few questions about being a writer ...

    Apr 29, 2008
  • Dramatic Poetry Re: Cold love

    I see the pain in the poem, I see how much the poet had been in love, but felt the pain was still too much for the entwining bond.

    Mar 11, 2008
  • General Fiction Short Stories Re: A man changed by a boy

    oooooooooo ooooooooooooo oo oo oooooooooooooooo oooo ooo o o o o o o oo o o oo um, thank you for the comments?

    Mar 6, 2008
  • Other Poetry Re: Inspiration, or lack of

    I like how it was inspiring us to write more, in a writing piece. It was deep too. I liked how you and a lot of people use "___ is ...

    Mar 5, 2008
  • General Fiction Short Stories Re: A man changed by a boy

    The Boy that Made a Difference As we all know, burglars and thieves take money and valuable belongings from us to get drugs and payments they owe paid. But what ...

    Mar 5, 2008
  • Dramatic Poetry Re: Clouded care

    Clouded Care By: BL As I watch the clouds above I wonder, Why can’t I? I am the one that can strive above the rest, So why can’t I fly ...

    Feb 28, 2008
  • Other Poetry Re: christmas poem

    You Make it Christmas for Me In the snowy evenings, We are so close together. At the toughest of times, We comfort one another. In the morning lightings, We awake ...

    Feb 23, 2008
  • Other Poetry Re: life

    I made this poem when i was just fooling around and, you have to let it come to you. If not, it's going to be bad, my experience. ~ Clouded ...

    Feb 23, 2008


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