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Re: chapter 1: Wrong place, wrong time
Intense! Are you Kyle? That English teacher sounds strict. I wonder why Mr.Callahan only got the note? I hope you explain how the killer (that just appeared out of nowhere) ...
Oct 28, 2008 -
Re: Happy Halloween...
“Love is a powerful and deadly substance. When wealth is added to the equation, love may cease.” -Anonymous At first, there was slashing. Then there was fear and blood of ...
Oct 28, 2008 -
Re: Nothing Rhymes With Purple
That was cute! it had a nice flow and consistent beat. I liked how there was a twist and fuse of Dr. Seuss in the Purple poem. It's seems to ...
Oct 22, 2008 -
Re: An end
I really enjoyed reading this: the story line was carefully thought out, it was well written with suspense, and I could really feel the tension Peony had. I really liked ...
Oct 12, 2008 -
Re: New "Corky" Story
Wits of Rich and the Poor Everyday, unusual things happen that can easily be avoided. If you see a turtle dancing and talking, you can merely just go into denial ...
Oct 11, 2008 -
Re: URGENT! Career project for #th GRade!
Thank you so much for both of you! THank you for answering at the very least! oh, and i donated 20 to "Dreamer", but now i'm not gonna fail! yeah! ...
May 2, 2008 -
Re: URGENT! Career project for #th GRade!
Hi, I'm in the 6th grade and i need someone to interview for a career choice in writing. I am verryyy desperate now since it is due Thursday so I ...
Apr 30, 2008 -
Re: Help on Career project
Hi, I'm in the 6th grade and i need someone to interview for a career choice in writing. I just need to ask a few questions about being a writer ...
Apr 29, 2008 -
Re: Cold love
I see the pain in the poem, I see how much the poet had been in love, but felt the pain was still too much for the entwining bond.
Mar 11, 2008 -
Re: A man changed by a boy
oooooooooo ooooooooooooo oo oo oooooooooooooooo oooo ooo o o o o o o oo o o oo um, thank you for the comments?
Mar 6, 2008 -
Re: Inspiration, or lack of
I like how it was inspiring us to write more, in a writing piece. It was deep too. I liked how you and a lot of people use "___ is ...
Mar 5, 2008 -
Re: A man changed by a boy
The Boy that Made a Difference As we all know, burglars and thieves take money and valuable belongings from us to get drugs and payments they owe paid. But what ...
Mar 5, 2008 -
Re: Clouded care
Clouded Care By: BL As I watch the clouds above I wonder, Why can’t I? I am the one that can strive above the rest, So why can’t I fly ...
Feb 28, 2008 -
Re: christmas poem
You Make it Christmas for Me In the snowy evenings, We are so close together. At the toughest of times, We comfort one another. In the morning lightings, We awake ...
Feb 23, 2008 -
Re: life
I made this poem when i was just fooling around and, you have to let it come to you. If not, it's going to be bad, my experience. ~ Clouded ...
Feb 23, 2008
