dark_horizon93

this is lovely!! me thinks.. that this story is highly addictive

No comment... I'll edit it soon... ok??

Ryan is their bassist or guitarist or well, something like that. I think. Anyway, this story's great but it's just two short eventhough it's one chapter...

Thanks for the crits people and yes, I just read about 'navel-gazing'. Thank you Claudette!

Yes! Like me. I wear black most of the time and people will say "Oh, you think you're so goth and emo huh?" Thanks for the crit!

hey thanks. People always call me emo but I am not one!! Pfft.. And by 'they' I mean the boys in my form...

THis is quite interesting indeed but your over repetition of 'the magic 8 ball' kinda irritates me. Perhaps you could find other words that should help you to fix this? ...